There was another person with the same thread, but i felt rude to barge in his/hers and ask someone to read mine as well.

So if anyone has the time, can you please read (and maybe revise) it for me? I have given it to my teachers, but their feedback wasn't so helpful. Whether it's good or harsh criticms, i'll take it all in positively.

Thank You.

Yeah for sure.

PM or chang3505@gmail.com

^ okay i PMed you. thank you once again

you can PM me too
i'll help out

^ PMed,

thank you guys for the support

if u still need help, ill gladly edit it for you.

Fire it here: mojomunkeez@gmai.com

can i email you guys my essays too? (=

go ahead, you should put the schools you're going for in the email as well.

^ hey, I e-mailed you.

hey i'll be glad to read your essay and edit and make it better grammar-wise ... can you read mine too? =]

If you still need someone to review your essay,
feel free to PM or e-mail me: mangojangoo@gmail.com

Sure, I'll read it

email me at jy3849@gmail.com