WOW, HEY THERE
So, you sound super hot. I can't take how hot you sound!!! O.O

I really really wish that your vocals were a little bit louder because the background music is seriously overpowering you, especially during the rap. And I really wanted to hear that rap, too! O: I liked how you added this old-style touch to it, though, from what I could hear. If that made ANY sense at all. xD I think it was because of the way you annunciated the words. It was just really cool!

I was a little bit shocked when you got to the chorus because it was off key. ): Like, you were singing all the right notes and intervals and stuff! It just wasn't in the same key as the background music. o.o So that was a little bit confusing to listen to.

Otherwise, awesome job! I really liked listening to this!

Wow! Your voice is nice, The lyrics are nicely written too.
You sound really sexy in some parts. I agree with the post above, the chorus was really off-key. ;[
The little bridge after Amber's part was REALLY REALLY GOOD! That was my favorite part.
Did you mix this yourself, very nice mixing too!

I hope to see you around here!!

oh, i liked this!
though the chorus part is a bit lower than the original, but the mixing is really good! loved it!

Ou! thanks for the comments and suggestions guys. I have to look back and edit some things up then.
Yesh, I did mix it myself. So I kept changing the volume back and forth cuz I didn't know what to do, LOL!
I will update in like... 9 hours when I'm out of school. c(= This song was super fun to do.


--Edited. Blah, is that how it's done? LOL. Harmonizing is epic fail >.<

ohhhh very very nice.
i love your english versions.
the lyrics fit nicely and so did your voice.
i'm definitely feeling the chocolate love. LOL.
thanks for sharing and keep it up. (^__^)

^ thank you. I think i'm starting to get the hang of all this mixing and what not. What's next.. Chu? LOL.
(yeah, F(x) fanatic here)

wow. PRO-NESS.
lmao.
your voise really fits to the song, and really really good lyrics.

Lol wow Mellers you did get really good a mixing! Lol it sounds amazing!
And i agree with someone up there i really like the bridge after Amber's rap i was mesmerized by it xD
Keep up the good work buddy! =)

i really like the lyrics, but this is too soft for me.
i wish you put more attitude in it.

i thought overall this was a good cover.. mixing and vocals were pretty nice except for the chorus.. just sounded it was slightly off...

yeah the instrumental made it sound so 'thug-ish' but your vocals seem more cute than.. yeah hahaha idk what i'm talking about

r these original lyrics? or did u make them yourselves?

^ lmfao "thug-ish"
the lyrics i had written myself.

PH4T i know what you mean. i wish i could make it louder, but whenever i try. it doesnt work.
it's weird. i wish i knew another way. garageband just hates me >.< lol

I use Garageband! O: Have you tried just duplicating the tracks that are too soft until they are loud enough? That's what I always have to do in my mixes.

Your voice fits it perfectly!! ))
And you're really into it so it doesn't sound flat and emotionless )
one thing though is that you might want to work on intonation a tad, it sometimes fluctuates a little, try to keep it steady

^ Yes, sometimes that can be challenging. Like, I just want to stay on one tone, and even if I tell myself to stop, I still end up doing it automatically... It gets annoying... LOL. Thanks for the advice, though!! ^^

Ariah Oh, snap. I never thought of that! I shall try it for my next recording. Thanks for the tip!