[Angie]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...;songID=4833307

HAHA i'm such a n00b at guitar but i was playing around and decided to make up a song

i think i read too many romance fics or something because the lyrics are LOL

umm yeah my singings not that good haha also i'm kind of sick but i wanted to record anyways just for hte heck of it i'll rerecord when i'm not sick lets see what else oh ok the lryics i guess its kind of like about childhood ~friendships~ gone bad if you know what i mean

do you recall
that the earth revolves around the sun
you were my sun
and we we used to laugh
we used to cry
we used to play

but babe that was yesterday
when we were young and making stupid choices
like two peas in a pod
holding hands together
watching the sun weather away
that was yesterday

and then i have to think up the second verse which i'm kind of lazy to do but i will do it someday

its kind of a lame song :( but playing around is fun hahaha. anyways...yeah haha

ps like my av ;) ;) ;)

edit: heres a cover of anna nalick's wreck of the day lol i just remembered id id this too

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...;songID=4648030

ps2: check out my other threads omg lol sry i'm annoying
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[LUCY<3]

I love your voice <333 It's so sweet and relaxing omg <3
DANGG, you never told me you could write songsss
AIOEJRIKGDSF
I love you =[

I dunno what to say cus i love it all too much T_T
YOU ROCK<3




-Your numberr1 fan

[becky]

AOWHF O:IAW
I never knew you could sing like that. >:[
sing more! sing more!
When you become famous, Lucy can be your #1 fan, and I'll be the manager. HEHE.

[ss5o1em]

it sounds good..
finish it..
and then add some finishing touches and it'll be really awesome

[cutedorkable]

thats was very pleasant lol
aww the lyrics are relli cute
finish it! lol
ur voice matches the lyrics lol
WELL DONE

[Lilvi3t1314]

it's nice.. i like ur lyrics too.. and ur voice is lovely..
i agree with cutedorkable..the lyrics does match ur voice..
u should finish it ^^

[Angie]

thanks! haha i finished the song i'll rerecord it tomorrow or so probably =D

[i spell well]

You have a nice voice, but you're right... the guitar progression sounds nice, but the actual playing is pretty... bad. ^^; No worries, though, I'm sure that will improve with practice. Just make sure to work out your finger strength so you can barre correctly. What kind of guitar are you using? Steel/nylon/? strings? It sounds like a steel string with a pretty high action (space between strings and fretboard, lower is better) or maybe just a thicker gauge than you can handle at the moment. Anyways, looking forward to the new recording.

[Angie]

^thanks for the CC =D i appreciate it. yeah i'll try to work harder on the guitar!

I made a song about the Greek mythological character, Icarus.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Icarus_(mythology)

I'm still trying to memorize the lyrics because I just wrote it recently and it's still not finished, haha, and the playing and singing isn't perfect yet either, but I'm working on it! Haha. And wow, I'm singing majorly high in this version, but it'll probably be lower.

It's easier to understand the lyrics if you know about Icarus beforehand. Basically he's this dude that tried to fly with wax wings, but once he got too close to the sun, they melted and he fell into the water and died. His father then went looking for him and found him washed up on the shores of the water or something and was sad, so he made a land called Icaria in memory of his son. The end.

Lyrics

Wax wings melt in the sun,
Fall to the ground,
The gates of hell are rolling.

Come and travel with me,
We'll go to the moon.
Drink in the cool sensations.

Turning blue from this high,
I don't know why.
The icy H2O in my hair.

Icarus...oh, Icarus...in chorus...I carve us...

We'll get our revenge on the sun,
Won't come back till we've won,
Steal your wings back, and we'll travel to the moon
Where there's no gravity, oxygen, fire and water, sun to slaughter,
Winter, spring, summer, falling faster, falling farther from the sun.
We'll show everyone.

Falling from the sky,
Burning under the heat,
The melting wax is crying.

If birds can soar in the air,
Why can't we do the same?
Let's make the whole world jealous.

Icaria, that's where I'll be,
Not under the sea,
As the feast of Poseidon.

Icarus...oh, Icarus...in chorus...I carve us...

We'll get our revenge on the sun,
Won't come back till we've won,
Steal your wings back, and we'll travel to the moon
Where there's no gravity, oxygen, fire and water, sun to slaughter,
Winter, spring, summer, falling faster, falling farther from the sun.
We'll show everyone.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=645260

^Click hi-fi under Revenge of the Sun.

[christina.]

Wooow, you're like.. really good.

If birds can soar in the air,

You said 'sky' instead of 'air.' ^^ But that's cool how you made up your own song. I love how you sang the parts that were like:

Where there's no gravity, oxygen, fire and water, sun to slaughter,
Winter, spring, summer, falling faster, falling farther from the sun.

But in the first chours, it sounded like you were out of breath when you were singing "sun to slaughter."

I like your voice! ^^ Sing more songs aha.

-Christina

[Angie]

yeah, i'm not normally a singer hahahaha but once i get used tot he song more i'll probably get the breathing down! thanks (: oops i probably wrote the wrong words ors omething oh well hahah ^^;

thanks though! when i finish it i'll repost it

[maly&ahpulee]

Ooh, I like it. Both songs are great. It sounds like the same melody, kinda, but it's still good. You can play the guitar, I'm sooSOo jealous. Doesn't matter if you're a newbie, if you can make a song up, then hey, that's good enough. Keep practicing and keep it up.

[Mercy]

Wow O_O...that's beautiful!!
I love acoustic guitarish songs :D
I didn't like them until recently...
But anyway--that was awesome!
You will finish the song right? :)
I'll look forward to thaaaat~

[whitekissx]

I'm impressed.

Sing more and write more.

[ritzy!]

WOWWWWWWWWw! This is really really really catchy!
And you sounds freakin' angelic or something! LOL
I loveeeee it.
Finish it. I ain't even embellishing yo~