[JSM]

this is a practice i did todayy...im sick btw [just having stuffy nose. my throat is normal ]

plz gimme some feedbasks
i hope i improved a lil bit
im not korean so plz dun pick on my pronunciation
i mispronounced a few words

UPLOADED 2 REDO VERSIONS OF THIS CLIP
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i hope yall like it~
hope i dun sound so bad

all comments are welcome

[apple-snapple-YUM]

i think this kind of song fits your voice.
-its not weak
-u did the notes well
-but the high notes...they seemed a little forced-but idk
and of course, i mean, there were minor things you can fix, including how you sing the notes.
i listened to this clip alot...haha~
i hope you arent stressing your voice! dont sing if you dont feel good! it'll make your voice worse...

[JSM]

^ oops i forgot to mention my throat is ok i only have a stuffy nose

thnx for the comments btw

[cindy-yang]

omg unni you improved from the last time i heard you. i hope you get better

[ohchells]

I think you sound a bit forceful at parts. There's room for improvements.
Other then that, I think you did not too bad [:

[JSM]

^ thnx for the comment
it was my real voice. i didnt force at any parts but i will make sure i go smoother next time so i wont sound forceful anymore

@ cindy_ thnx gurl

[cutedorkable]

hey!!
ur voice did improve from before! good job
but about this song..ur voice kinda sounded..force and there was like teenie emotion but not enough
just work on those and u will be fine
relax ur voice too!!
KEEP INMPROVING

[JSM]

^ thnx for the tips
if i have lil HW tmrw i will redo this song

i was bored and i got time todayy so i resang the song
i like #2 better

[natz2811]

i think u did a great job especially for the korean (when u say that ur not korean...) am not korean but sure sounded like the song itself ! lol
Other than that:
-the notes were good
-u were in tempo
-just the high notes part sounded a bit weak...but might be becoz ur a bit sick...
but overall good job!!

hope u didnt take the comment badly though....^^

[Pinkychan]

ouuuyhhh everything is good except i tihink you've got a bit of a nasal so ayh thats all~~ ><
bubt yah good job on the notes and stuff =3

[JSM]

@ pinkychan: i got a stuffy nose thnx for the comments
@ natz2811: thnx for the comments. i didnt take it badly. ur comment was detailed so i know what i can do better

thnx for droppin by everyone

[missxsuong]

you need to improve
it seems like you were trying to sound like the girls but didn't succeed

[JSM]

i didnt try to sound like them none of the 3 versions.
i know... i need to improve so much more till i can actually get in sumwhere

[disfunktional.]

oOoh. I thought you improved alot from the last times ^^
You can really hit the high notes, and i think this song fits you too xP
Keep it up xD
--EDITS*
You have good korean! lols

[JSM]

^ hehe yea
all mah korean friends gave me props for that
they said my korean pronunciation improved along with my singing
thnx for droppin by

[whitekissx]

you have a pretty good korean pronounciation. i can understand you, at least. haha.

and you sound forced... stressed... nasally.... you already heard it.

you can improve but you did well. you have a strong voice, develop it.

[JSM]

^ haha im glad u could understand me.
nasally -> mah stuffy nose
stressed, forced -> dunno why it sounds like that... gotta go practice
thnx for the comment

[sangwoostar]

Your voice sounds a little bit shaky all through out the song though, especially when you try to reach for the high notes. I hear your voice shaking in very hidden places through out the piece (sorry if you don't understand that quite clearly, I'm used to critiquing a lot of different voice ranges)
But for a non-Korean, it sounds like you have quite an advantage because your pronounciation is pretty okay.

This song doesn't exactly strike out as one of the best song choices to really show your vocal abilities, but it matches your voice well.

[JSM]

^ thnx for the comments
i was just doing it for fun
its not one of my audition songs

[w1f3_0f_x14h_junsu]

you improved again i'm very proud of you...

one tip:
-your singing could be smoother...

but good job