i did a song last time and practiced on the tips that i got (i used jayz_fan as my acc last time ^^")
so i'm back for another trial *
it aint a popsong so you don't expect anyth close to that
Soundclick - You Steal My Love Away
i listened to it for only around 3 times before i recorded
and i only had one cut in the middle between two parts. other than that i did it in all one breath.
so don't be too harsh on me. just harsh enough
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criticize me!
) You're in tune for the most part, but you could work on control. Besides that, your voice isn't too bad. Keep practicing! 
