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Traces ~ Lim Jeong Hee Look :O A new face!

#1 User is offline   wistful 

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Posted 17 February 2007 - 04:23 PM

I'm sure none of you have heard me sing before, unless you're a DBSK fan and happened to listen to any of the SBSK fan CDs. XD I was on both of those. But otherwise, I'm a new face! (Or rather, new voice.)

I have no formal training whatsoever. :x This was also my first attempt at this song and I don't speak Korean unfortunately, so it's just a clip. I think there's a lot that could be improved with it when I re-record it someday, but I'd like to share it anyway:

here~
(The file got distorted somehow, so I took it down.)

The volume may seem kinda low in the beginning, but it gets louder in the chorus. XD Just a little warning...

I hope you like it. <3 Comments are always appreciated too.
"In order to be irreplaceable, one must always be different."
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Posted 17 February 2007 - 04:47 PM

i think that most of it was done well..
the beginning was a bit shaky though..
but it got better..
but i'm no singer..but yeh..just my feedback..
but ur voice is really nice and strong..
post other songs on soon!!
and could u pm me the instrumental?
i'm kinda working on that song right now too.. ^^

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Posted 17 February 2007 - 04:58 PM

Thanks. smile.gif I would PM you the instrumental if I had it. haha I searched around for it also, but I had no luck. I just had the song playing kinda low in the background.

The beginning was a little rough on me because it's low for my range. :x I was in my school's choir for a little while and I was a first soprano...
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Posted 17 February 2007 - 07:39 PM

Your voice is strong with a nice vibrato. smile.gif
However, you were off tune in some places and sometimes you push your voice so it`s not soft like the song. It has to be soft, but audible.
The high note was off pitch because you pushed it up there ^^; it has to come out without so much pressure. Work on your low range, as well.
You had some nasally sounding places, but overall it was okay..^^

Keep working on it and I think it`ll come out great. <3
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Posted 17 February 2007 - 07:56 PM

the part
where you sing maneun sarangmee.. whatever was off pitch. it wasnt bad. nice job
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Posted 17 February 2007 - 11:33 PM

Work on control and pitch. But your voice isn't bad. smile.gif
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