[corky XD]

First time posting my song up here Doesn't matter how harsh your comments are just post em :] I want to know my mistakes and how I can improve. Do keep in mind that I'm vietnamese and not japanese xD And my voice is low soooo there's a few notes I had to struggle with. I'm fourteen and never took any singing classes except for a few choir classes here and there. So I'm pretty sure I made a lot of mistakes xD Well here goes:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...;songID=5017094

[t33z3]

I don't know this song but it sounds like you have a nice voice! =] The only thing is, you said it's japanese, but I can barely make out what you're saying so it sounds like mandarin in some parts to me.

[corky XD]

xX was my japanese that bad D:

anyways thanks for teh comment

[egghead]

Nice singing. xD
You make yourself sound totally japanesey-ish. errr, yeah.
whatever. har har.
ok bye for now, ttyl.

[dreaded_destiny_]

ooo.. I've sung this song too~
it's really fun

your voice is really nice but I think the instrumental is a bit too loud compared to your voice, so maybe that's why the others couldn't really make out what you were singing^^

in general the pronounciation is not too bad but sometimes you may want to enuciate your words a bit so they are too "slurred together"

anyways, good job!