[tiffbiffx3]

Hey! This is my second time posting my singing on soompi, lol.
I attempted at irony, so stupid of me. Anyways, I did the rapping part which i had to learn in like 2 days...haha
I have never rapped in my life and I'm not korean so the words are all wrong, haha...dont kill me...
that last part of the rap was like all blahdeeblah~ haha...I messed on other parts too. I know the ending is bad. No need to comment on that.

im 13 btw!!! I <3333 Junki's Juki's version better!! lol

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Feel free to listen to my other bad songs

[mikez]

things to improve on:

you sound really flat when you sing, it wasnt that bad at first, but near the middle on you were like singing like the song was a drag

your rapping is better than your singing, but you sound really reading ish so no comment on that

could also improve the quality some too

[juki_love]

hihi~

it was a good attempt^^
hmm... i think the main drawback was your pronunciation ( i shouldn't even be saying that because i'm not korean -__-")
but yea rapping was good~
it took me like 70 attempts before i gave up trying to perfect the rap -__-"

you did a good job==

- ju.ki.

[thesweetestkrn]

i agree with everyone else about your pitch and your pronunciation
im only saying that cause im korean
but .. even then my pronunciation is actually white washed
good try though
keep practicing

[tiffbiffx3]

thanks for the advice you guys! I'll work on my pronunciation and such.

[banggutbanggut3]

Hey, could I give you a little feedback, too...?
Okay, so I think you rap better than me but I think it kind of sounded like you were holding your nose. Your pronounciation is pretty good for someone that is non-Korean.....better than my pronounciation in Mandarin (I'm Korean)...so yeah...good work, just try your best and stuff!!!!!!