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Butterfly Grave my attempt^^

#1 User is offline   rache114 

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Posted 07 March 2007 - 04:26 PM

i'm attempting to sing "butterfly grave" by take....i don't really think it good^^, so don't be too harsh, ok?! lol

i messed up so many times sweatingbullets.gif
welp here it is:

me singing "butterfly grave"
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Posted 07 March 2007 - 06:11 PM

Well, you were OK, but you don't sound like you are expressing any feelings in particular (wait..does that make sense?).you need to express more and your tone is almost always the same...your voice is nice but I don't think this is the right story for you.....keep trying though!!!
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