[xkiseki]

It's been a while since I updated my soundclick. I kept running out of breath. Please excuse any of mistakes I may have made it the lyrics, I don't read hangul very well.


Irony
I didn't do the rap, because I can't rap for the life of me, and i kept running out of breath too.

My Sorry Heart
There's no instrumental available for this song, but i absolutely adore it. uber short clip though

CCs appreciated

<3 J

[halloall]

you have a clear voice but both times the notes didn't match

[itrayya]

sorry heart:
it sounds really rushed and bunched up at the beginning.
i agree, sometimes the notes did not match.
try to be more softer... in presenting and in ending...

irony:
it sound like you were trying too hard in the beginning.
it almost sound like you were shouting the words.

i like your voice.
i think your tone is good,
just work more on the breathing so you
can release the words better.
work on the notes too.
keep it up.

[xkiseki]

halloall:

thank you for the comment. but what do you mean by my notes don't match? does that mean ny voice isn't matching the original notes? Just wondering because i'm not sure what you mean.

thanks again.


itrayya:

hmmm... yeah you're right, it does sound like i'm yelling the words. =X oh poop.

and yeah, i'm not very good a breath support. thanks for the comments. i appreciate it.

<3 J

[ilove korea]

You should try to learn the pronounciation better because it kind of like makes the song boring cuz you can't understand what you're saying. Plus, the lyrics don't fall on the right beat in Irony. You're going too slow and then too fast and yeah.

[xiaochingu.]

hi!
i listened to irony and you sounded pretty good but you kindof overexaggerated....like you put alot of attitude into your singing..which is a good thing..but be sure not to over do it....and sorry heart...WOW you sang it accapella....very brave...and you did ok...sometimes you went out of tune ..so..i guess it would help if you were listening to the song while singing it?....um...especially on the parts where they speed it up?...your sounded flat on those notes...keep working at it!

[*lyrynne*]

you're voice is quite nice...the breathing is not good though...try singing while you're lying on your bed it'll make you practice your lung power and breathing...sounds weird huh? it'll work...

[xkiseki]

hi!
i listened to irony and you sounded pretty good but you kindof overexaggerated....like you put alot of attitude into your singing..which is a good thing..but be sure not to over do it....and sorry heart...WOW you sang it accapella....very brave...and you did ok...sometimes you went out of tune ..so..i guess it would help if you were listening to the song while singing it?....um...especially on the parts where they speed it up?...your sounded flat on those notes...keep working at it!

Thank you for your comment. I agree I do sound over exagerrated at the beginning. i think i should've learned the song betetr before attempting it. i didn't listen to the acapella one before i sang it. i actually wasnt trying to sing the same exact key for this one.

thank you again for the comment. i appreciate it.

you're voice is quite nice...the breathing is not good though...try singing while you're lying on your bed it'll make you practice your lung power and breathing...sounds weird huh? it'll work...

hahaha. does that really work? i'd be kinda sad if it didn't but i'll try it. thanks

<3 J

[xx_swit_c_xx]

Listened to Irony:

Way to close to the microphone....^^ You're standing and still right? sometimes it sounds like you're shaking the mic around.. which is not good if you want a steady voice/sound =)

It's always hard for one girl to sing 5 girls parts.. haha so props props =)
I'm gonna try to record this song too lol.. gotta find my friggen headphones though.
I'm excited to try that rap part hahaaha..... although i probably will suck.
Enjoyed listening, keep working hard =]

[halloall]

well my english isn't that good so it's hard for me to sexplain it right well i think i can say you sang wrong notes ... other notes and your voice was kind of squeaking i think *pleasedon'tbemad*
but you have a clear voice