[JWonNie]

I think you can tell that I'm new at singing x]
Please leave me constructive C&C!!
If you do, I'll give you a cookie [aren't you excited?]
I sound like a pig so, please excuse me.
There're a lot of mistakes in there...
BEWARE!!!!

BoA - Key of Heart
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The sound is really unbalanced... x]
I had to use my cellphone, I'll get a mike soon!

[itrayya]

im listening....

i like the instrumental..

need more breathing. your going into the low range without enough air. i think.
you sound like you're not using your whole voice.
sounds like you're using a fake voice... i think that's what it's called.

but good effort. i like that.
practice. keep it up.

[TeddyAngel]

Expanding on itrayya, when I was first listening to it I didnt listen with the breathing but now that she's mentioned it...its really obvious in the beginning hehe...breath through ur mouth into ur lungs and make sure ur shoulders dont come up oki? And ya u already told me that u cant hit those notes so practice and practice and stay in pitch!! I really like ur voice tho u dont sound like a pig gosh!!~