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#1 User is offline   *nie_nie* 

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Posted 07 November 2005 - 06:51 PM

Hey again everyone! This is my first time posting ever since Soompi crashed. Well, I recorded "Right Here waiting" by Richard Marx. It was pretty much a one-shot and there are a few noises at the end, so please don't mind.. Please any comments/criticism you have.. =)

Here's the Link: http://www.soundclick.com/nienie1102

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Posted 07 November 2005 - 08:47 PM

i thought it was good^_^ i like this song a lot, we should do a duet! XP
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Posted 08 November 2005 - 06:04 PM

I like this song!
You have a pretty voice.
One thing: when you pronouncesome of your "-er"s (like "whatever you do") It kinda sounds like it's too much "ur"...maybe... think of placing the "r" at the very end of the note.
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Posted 08 November 2005 - 07:04 PM

this song brings back so many bittersweet memories.

but i like the way you sang it. very soft and delicate.
nice job<3


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Posted 08 November 2005 - 08:38 PM

This is a pretty good song :] .
Hm try to put more " mmph " (emotion) into the chorus parts.
You did a pretty nice job for a one-shot. Keep singing/posting. smile.gif
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