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Poetry Help! Ahhh! Project Due Tomorrow!

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Posted 20 May 2007 - 05:55 PM

hi...i am 9th grade and need help!!

I wrote a poem called, "Time"



What is time?
Time to live.
Time to think.
Time to dream.

Time is a measure of our existance.
Time never stands still.
Time moves on.
Time never retraces its steps.

Time is continuous.
Time can never stop.
Time can heal wounds.
Time can bring death.

You can kill time.
You can take time out.
You can keep time.
you can be behind time.

Time marks the progression of growth and decay.
Time governs every single act we are capable of.
I had better fill in that tax return.


P.S. Can someone add some ideas and tell me what i should fix and i need to have at least two language device and one poetic device.....and tell me what it is...and tell me how it means....if you change something...THANKS!!! biggrin.gif

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