[simply_dream]

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[sarang-hyesung]

IT SEEMS LIKE YOUR PUTTING PRESSURE ON YOUR VOICE WHILE YOU WERE RAPPING..TRY LOSING IT UP A LITTLE.. AND THE SINGING PART YOU SING IT A LITTLE FLAT.. TRY SINGING IT WITH EMOTION. ^^

[x3wendy]

it sounds really breathy at some points. the layers, of voices kind of disturb me. the singing was pitchy. i guess it's pretty good x]

[brianjooboi 012]

whoa...not bad not bad...nice rapping..:]

[simply_dream]

sarang-hyesung - pressure... hmm i'll look into that, maybe i m trying so hard to have a attitude it sounds weird =P thanks for the tip =) i will try that

x3wendy - breathy? at the rap or singing.. or just both? lol the layers of voices? in the rap or singing? LOL iono cuz in the real one they actually have 'layers of voice' too but their mixing is good so it sounds good XD i should work on my mixing

brianjooboi 012 - thanks for listening =D

[charzzy]

woah i think it was pretty good! i like it. lol
daym, why is it so short? lol.

[ritzy!]

the rapping was sort of too rough for me .. so rough that it sounded like you were yelling at me .. --''
but the parts where you weren't were good..

[r0mantisteg0ist]

the pronounciation is a little weird. like where you stress the syllables in weird places and stuff.
but good job with the rhythm.

[butterflyeffect]

Yeah you stress in weird places, but not bad.

[yunakue]

Seems like you tried really hard but in conclusion, you started yelling out and sounds really rough... which kinda make me cringe a little.

And about the chorus, sing with emotion.

Overall, good job.

[mikez]

despite what everyone said

from a rapping point of view, the rapping was very well done, all of the aspects were there cept could be a little more "slurred" i guess? lol

people only didnt like it cuz they are biased by the original, but the rapping itself was perfectly fine, im actually really impressed

the hook isnt as powerful tho, could use more work on the singing

[cindy-yang]

for the rapping it was pretty good. i don't think i could even do that x_x
the singing was ok but a bit strange. it seems like you were just kinda stressing it
sorry i cant explain i suck x_x

[simply_dream]

charzzy - thanks for listening =D it's short because... uhh... i'll do a full 1 soon? lol

ritzy! - i sounded like i was yelling at someone? LOL i will try to tone it down a lil next time

r0mantisteg0ist - actually i wasnt sure where to stress it, since i am not korean, but i tried pronouncing everything and stressed where GD had stressed, but i will watch out next time =)

リズ * - yupp will definitely try to work on that

yunakue - hehe i will learn to tone it done and stop 'yelling'

mikez - thanks! =D yess... will work more on the singing too hehe

cindy-yang - it's ok, i get what u mean =P park bom's voice is hard to imitate... and with her singing in my headphones when i record it sorta resulted like that, must get my own style when i sing =P

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR LISTENING AND COMMENTING!!!! <3

[tofuu]

i liked the rapping actually lol . i think the chorus could be tweaked up but other than that..why not a longer clip :x haha

[hayonju]

you're goood (:

GO GO GO GLORIAAA!!~ :b

[jocko200]

love ur rapping gloria...
keep up the good work..

[onetwothuy]

i think you did really good!
and you used the we belong together instrumental too!