[ah_sal]

Hey everyone!
I recorded myself singing Harudal by DBSG!
It's such a catchy song to sing~
Hope you all like it!
Btw, I was meant to study for my exams ><
Still am

Soundclick <3

Your comments are greatly appreciated!

[joongified.]

i like it!!
O_O i dont get why there are no comments ><..
its really good =)

[KimL]

oh i listened to ur soundclick yesterday i think.. forgot to comment!

Harudal
1/3 of the clip is in fact the intro lol
some offbeat & offkey (in a rush sometimes) but other than that it sounds ok, try to add more nuances (less flat) though

River Flows In You
that's creative!
i don't understand all the lyrics... maybe u should write them?

Tornado
some offkey too (lowest notes)
oh ur 'ni' before the instrumental break is not right, and it's really noticeable
sometimes i think u cut the end of the words too fast? => work on ur breathe and try to find the best moment to breathe
u sound cute on the chorus ^^

Yeoniniyuh
my favorite on ur soundclick


watch out the highest and lowest notes, try to aim them more precisely,
also, maybe u can start mixing instead of just singing over it? u'll see, mixing is sooo fun!

keep it up

[tink3rr]

agree with kimL. it's good though , but some off keys, you need to put more feeling in it , cause it seems kinda blunt , but it's still very good already ^^ , keep workin' ~

[FTTS_Princess]

Since i really like Air City.....i like the music....YOU DID SO GREAT <3, i like your voice <3 I really like your version of Harudal. This song is so catchy~

[toomuchsmiling]

I critique. So I'd tell you that it sounded very off key. Some notes were on, but most didn't work. I'm sorry, but at least you tried!

[dream-maker]

You sang pretty much on-pitch most of the time to me! But you don't have any change in volume or attitude in your voice... Try to sing with more emotion. Good job though!