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Harudal By Dongbang~ Please listen and comment ><

#1 User is offline   ah_sal 

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Posted 11 June 2007 - 12:51 AM

Hey everyone!
I recorded myself singing Harudal by DBSG!
It's such a catchy song to sing~
Hope you all like it!
Btw, I was meant to study for my exams ><
Still am sad.gif

Soundclick <3

Your comments are greatly appreciated!
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#2 User is offline   joongified. 

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Posted 28 June 2007 - 05:29 PM

i like it!!
O_O i dont get why there are no comments ><..
its really good =)


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#3 User is offline   KimL 

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Posted 28 June 2007 - 05:55 PM

oh i listened to ur soundclick yesterday i think.. forgot to comment!

Harudal
1/3 of the clip is in fact the intro lol
some offbeat & offkey (in a rush sometimes) but other than that it sounds ok, try to add more nuances (less flat) though

River Flows In You
that's creative!
i don't understand all the lyrics... maybe u should write them?

Tornado
some offkey too (lowest notes)
oh ur 'ni' before the instrumental break is not right, and it's really noticeable tongue.gif
sometimes i think u cut the end of the words too fast? => work on ur breathe and try to find the best moment to breathe
u sound cute on the chorus ^^

Yeoniniyuh
my favorite on ur soundclick smile.gif


watch out the highest and lowest notes, try to aim them more precisely,
also, maybe u can start mixing instead of just singing over it? u'll see, mixing is sooo fun!

keep it up
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#4 User is offline   tink3rr 

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Posted 28 June 2007 - 08:30 PM

agree with kimL. it's good though , but some off keys, you need to put more feeling in it , cause it seems kinda blunt , but it's still very good already ^^ , keep workin' ~
expect the unexpected.
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Posted 10 July 2007 - 09:24 PM

Since i really like Air City.....i like the music....YOU DID SO GREAT <3, i like your voice <3 I really like your version of Harudal. This song is so catchy~



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Post icon  Posted 11 July 2007 - 06:46 PM

I critique. So I'd tell you that it sounded very off key. Some notes were on, but most didn't work. I'm sorry, but at least you tried! smile.gif
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Posted 12 July 2007 - 12:42 AM

You sang pretty much on-pitch most of the time to me! But you don't have any change in volume or attitude in your voice... Try to sing with more emotion. Good job though!



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