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#1 onigiri_kun

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Post icon Posted 15 June 2007 - 11:12 PM

My Gift to You

hi everyone!! I just enter Si5 with this song~ i hope everyone likes it~
this was quite challenge~ mixing isn't too good either.... hehe
but I hope y'all will give it chance^__^
feedback needed!!

and this is not Korn's "my gift to you"~~~!

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#2 dark intuitions

lalalalalala with you~~

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Posted 15 June 2007 - 11:49 PM

firrrsssssttttt
i shalll come back after dinner!

Edit:
wow at the high notes in the chorus ^^
How've you been? You're never around anymore

<3 harmonies as always
Goodluck for soompi idol!

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#3 Raix

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Posted 16 June 2007 - 12:23 AM

HAHAHAHA Korn?

Nah...didn't think ti was. I already commented on this. Good luck ^^

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#4 SweetsLove

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Posted 16 June 2007 - 05:26 AM

Wooo, I really like your soft vibrato + tone! Sounds nice ^^ <3

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#5 River Angel Odin

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Posted 16 June 2007 - 06:35 AM

I've never heard the original before, but this sounds amazing! I absolutely love your voice. It's very easy to listen to.

The main thing I noticed was pitch. It's usually when you're just starting a line, but you're often a bit flat. Also, you were holding a note toward the beginning and slowly lost pitch. It gradually went flat.

I'm so happy to find somebody who can harmonize well, though. ^^ Sometimes I have trouble finding someone who can harmonize well. x_x

Awesome job! =D Good luck in Soompi Idol! I entered, too! ^^ But...uhh...you'll surpass me easily. x__x

#6 grimalice

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Posted 16 June 2007 - 10:23 AM

wow! nice voice though it is a little different from the original version, this is very good

#7 Sou

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Posted 16 June 2007 - 04:51 PM

Love for Oni~~

Will save comments for SI. <3

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#8 geneyoonit

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Posted 16 June 2007 - 09:39 PM

dood.. ur suppose to save ur best for last~~~

LOL jp, u did really good in this song

and yes sou, i will follow ur footsteps and save my comment in case i gotta judge

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#9 onigiri_kun

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Posted 17 June 2007 - 09:06 PM

wooo~ so many comments~~

dark intuitions>>
yo~~~ how are you! haha! thanx for the support! always the first one to post!!^__^
I just don't sing fo often~ haha~ Si5 is a good reason too eh~~

Rai-Rai>>
woohoooo~~~~

SweetsLove>>
thanx for the support^^

River Angel Odin>>
haha~ thanx for the critique! haha~ I noticed that part~~
I will go back to fix it^^

grimalice>>
yea~~ I tried to change it a bit~ hope you liked it~

Sou>>
you love me?

haha~ thanx

geneyoonit>> hate~

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#10 geneyoonit

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Posted 18 June 2007 - 03:04 AM

do u really?

u kno that if u wrote that only to me, it'll error "20 characters"

u spammer u

i write an essay and this is how u repay me?! LOL

jp. u kno i ruv u n ur sxy voice

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#11 Jacky_Knife

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Posted 18 June 2007 - 04:37 AM

Hey asswipe!

I hope you win the SI5. You really deserve it.

I also hope you die in a fire.

Aki, Lucifer, Riri, mikexc and me are rooting for you pal. Give'em a ballad that'll make girls commit suicide or something. ^_- Ban-muthafxxking-zai!!!

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#12 sikkony

I thought this was only for F.O.S ppl!

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Posted 18 June 2007 - 09:21 AM

QUOTE(onigiri_kun @ Jun 16 2007, 05:12 PM)

Hey man, that's gold. I love it... The music and your voice go together extremely well! Love your falsetto. You shoulda left the highest notes part out! They were only the thing that made me notice noticable flaws! Strong start to SI5. Really awsesome stuff, keep up the good work. Theres only a few guys in SI5, and you're strong competition. Show the gals guys got it too

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#13 xACIDxHEADx

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Posted 21 June 2007 - 10:13 PM

bump.

now wheres my gift >:(

boo!

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#14 sanoobie

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Posted 22 June 2007 - 12:08 AM

o couldnt have been any better ~ u sang something beside MIKA ! lol jk

this chemistry song is nice!
you did a great job on it and i enjoyed the high notes! oo your vibrato is nice also

good luck on soompi idol~