[cannivalism]

Ahh...
here is the link~

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=723453

hopefully that takes you to it =/

anyways, there are five songs X3

Namie Amuro Covers
STROBE

DBSK Covers
Begin
Heart, Mind, and Soul
Beautiful Thing

Do As Infinity
Rakuen

heh o.o;

Please listen, especially to the Korean song. It is not the first time I recorded a song in Korean, (2nd song, woo lol) and I'm still getting the hang of reading it. =/ Can you point out my mistakes?

And it would be nice to hear some critisms on my covers, thank you. XD

Oh, and... please... don't steal. =/ Really, its happened before and it pissed me off lol.

edit:
HAHA, uhh I forgot to say... D8
STROBE.. uh, gah, I'm only 16 years old, lmao, singing that song was so embarassing... soo uhh... sorry for the lyrics if its a bit..

and uhm, for Beautiful Thing, do you know where I could find the instrumental? The real instrumental? In which Xiah's voice was cut out of the song ; lmao XD I need it. The Piano version is okay and all, but it doesn't feel right when I use it lol.

Thanks yo~

[Eider]

strobe : no emotion, no power at all. Try to support your voice a bit. this song is meant to be sang harder than you did... there also also some spots were you have to watch your pitch. Your voice is kinda pleasant to listen to... and your vibrato is nice but i don't really think you are using your voice in the right way.

Rakuen : same goes with this... no power. pitchy too. I feel your vibrato is too much at the first lines. The chorus gets better in power but you seem too pushed... like drowning suffocated oO... and your voice ends beeing bouncy because of sudden tries of power. I don't think this is the right song for you -__-

Beautiful Thing: Your korean is not quite there... you have to work on it...I can understand what you say ._.U and there are some words that aren't right. But i like how you sing this instead, more power, more emotion than the two songs before. Vibrato is pretty. You should sing more ballads =)

xDDD actually i just think you should improve your power in the songs.... just that.

[cannivalism]

Eider: For Strobe:Thanks for the critism! So, basically my downs is the power in my vocals and the emotion in this song? I'll get to that when I rerecord it. I was to scared to sing it with more power because my parents would've been like O.O;

For Rakuen: No power? Ahh first of all, I want to know what you mean by power... ._.; As in like, the strength of my voice? Thanks for pointing this out~ I think I might've put to much influence of heavy jrock in this song that it didn't work -__-; I'm definately going to retry this.

For Beautiful Thing: I want to understand what you mean by not quite there. I might understand better from another's point of view instead of my own. D: But it seems that I got everything else good~

Power, power, power...
Gah, I want to do that but if you mean by loudness in my voice...
I'm going to break my microphone T_T I'm a loud singer naturally, so when I reach high notes I'm really loud. =/ That is probably why in Rakuen the pitch gets a bit shakey after struggling with the power/loudness of my voice.

dilnoze: I'm afraid to touch your link. o.o;

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eh please people~ I really need the critism @_@;
I'd like to hear that, comments, suggestions in what songs you believe fits my voice and stuff~ I'd really appreciate it.

[dominyqz]

Eider: For Strobe:Thanks for the critism! So, basically my downs is the power in my vocals and the emotion in this song? I'll get to that when I rerecord it. I was to scared to sing it with more power because my parents would've been like O.O;

hehe .. i feel ur pain .. i always check the house out and make sure there's nobody home before i try to sing aloud .. LOL~~ .. but overall .. your voice's nice .. didn't get to hear much of ur songs since my line is quite laggy today .. but keep up the good work ^^

[r0mantisteg0ist]

your voice is really pretty, and your vibrato is nice.
after hearing all your songs, it seems that the problem is that they all sound really similar, despite being different songs. you sing them the same way, and i feel like you're kind of covering up your voice.

if you kind of bare a little more, it would be more interesting to listen to.
go crazy xD

im crazy jealous of your vibrato T___T

[cannivalism]

dominygz: Haha, yeah I know how that is lol. Doesn't it get annoying when a family member comments on it just to embarass you~ XD Its alright, I'm happy that you attempted to listen to my covers and comment.

r0mantisteg0ist: Thanks for listening. XD I've practiced my vibrato a lot. lol
Similar sounding? Gah... and I don't know about covering, but I'm pretty far from the mic. I have to put it inbetween me and the speakers just so that I could get both sounds in. D:

[malljclay]

Very good.
Love the vibratos.

Try to work on the higher notes : )
Yeah....what they said POWER