SAT I: 2020
SAT II: Math 2 (700), Chinese (800), US History (780)
School Activities:
Chinese Club (Treasurer senior yr.)- 3 years
Speech and Debate Club (Vice president senior yr.)-3 years
Wildlife Conservation Club (Vice President)- 2 yrs
California Scholarship Federation Club (Junior Class Representative)- 4 yrs
Amnesty International (Club blogger/ member of leadership team)-2 yrs
Swim Team (3 yrs girls varsity)
Volunteer:
Library
Wildlife Center
*I also draw images for children magazine publications by CWA (California Waterfowl Association). It's a nonprofit organization which works to conserve wildlife and wetlands.
( I probably will have at least 200 hours total in volunteering,....I hope ><)
Awards:
1st Place California Jr. Duck Stamp Competition 2007 & 2008
4th Place National Chinese Cultural Competition
(and more little art awards....xD)
Other Activities:
Drawing: 10 yrs+
Dancing (ballet& lyrical): 10 yrs+
Chinese School: Uhh...since kindergarden..haha
Church:
Work (tutoring)
Internships:
Interning this summer at Santa Clara County Office of Affordable Housing (government office =p)
Ooh..I'm also planning a community event with VNA (Vision New America) for a neighborhood community.
Reach Schools: UCLA, USC, Cornell
Safety: UC Irvine
My main concern right now is that I only took 2 AP classes and 1 Honors Class so far....I'm planning to take 4 AP classes senior year though. >< Dunno how bad that will affect my application. My SAT 1 scores aren't high enough for the schools I'm hoping to be accepted into either...so I'm thinking about retaking it a 4th time..-__-;
If anyone could give me some feedback, that would be very very helpful. Thanks in advance!
Don't worry about the classes you're taking. It actually doesn't matter too much, as long as you get As. Putting Chinese school on an application is pretty worthless and shows that you're desperate for something else to put on it. If I were you, I'd raise my SAT score to at least 2200 (of course, shoot for 2400), because you are exactly like all the other applicants who apply to the schools you're interested in. Your Math IIC score is a bit on the low side, try taking Math IC if you can't get it up. Colleges look at the percentile of your scores, not the actual score itself, and a 700 is maybe a 70 percentile. It looks pretty respectable, but everybody and their mother gets 800s. Especially Chinese people. Your extracurriculars seem a little sparse, but I don't think there's much you can do about that, now. At any rate, UC Irvine is no problem for you. UCLA.... would be a relatively long shot. Cornell will be an even longer shot because Cornell is a private school and you are a stereotypical Asian on paper. USC is iffy, it will depend on your major. A good school to shoot for and that you have a fair chance of getting into with your qualifications is UC San Diego.
But I ask you: why aren't you applying to Berkeley? It has the same acceptance rate as UCLA, though it's an exponentially better school.








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