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Posted 15 November 2007 - 02:47 PM

i REALLY don't no where to put this..


anyways, i need help with a project due tomorow...
its a descriptive piece that consists of 8 sentences but i can't seem to get the last two

SIMILE-

Like a kite blowing aimlessly in the wind, i sometimes need to come back to earth, to the simple things in life.

and

ADJECTIVE CLAUSE-

Every summer the time which i spend in seclusion, communing with nature gives me that oppurtunity , as well as the renewed strength i need to face any obsticles that lie ahead...

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those are my teachers examples..i need sentences that have to do with THIS picture



yeah...its kinda hard...

Standing in the dusky shadow of the ancient Mayan temple, I am filled with awe. Exhausted after trudging for hours under the irradiant sun, I look deeply into the vivid colors of the canopy, relieving the heat from my body. Above me in the bright blue sky, picturesque exotic birds fly among the pale clouds that transform their shapes while moving slowly through the sky. In the jungle, chirping and cawing, the birds communicate to get ready for a flight. Besides me an orange centipede climbs up the structure, squirming silently to the top. As I climb up the jagged stone steps closer and closer to the top, I feel an affinity for this past civilization.
thats wat i got so far
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