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#1 User is offline   qweeererooqweer 

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Posted 21 November 2007 - 09:42 AM

FULL VERSION UP. smile.gif

Hellohello. I'm back with another english version, haha. I know I haven't done a proper cry eye version yet, but I'll get to it. But! I love Anyband's songs a lot! And since my korean is horrible, I tried to do TPL in english. First of, this is a fanmade lyrics not some official lyrics and we all know that the original korean TPL is so much better by a gazillion time but... I couldn't help but resist it trying out in english. Hee.

Link is here.

//update.
I reduced the volume of the instrumental, so I guess you can hear my voice more clearly. Link is here. I guess I'll do a full version of TPL. smile.gif

I only did like 1min of it and I think I sounded really bad in some parts. I'll probably do a full length one and probably dabble on promise you? haha I don't know. But I hope you liked it.


//UPDATEE27NOV.
I wrote finish the lyrics today!! Haha And I rushed to record it BUT while halfway recording it, my computer hanged on me! And Audacity is being a major pain in an ass now and I can't edit it and stuff, sooo here's half of the song. Haha. And the quality is... not good since I have a lousy mic but oh well... And my rapping... I think it's weird. Anyways, LINK HERE. Oh and the first 1 min is similar to the previous one since I was too lazy to do a new first part. Anyhow, hope you guys like it and the full version should be up probably by the end of this week. smile.gif


//UPDATEE30NOV
I redid the whole song, so I hope it is much clearer now. And yes, the full song is up now. smile.gif I didn't do much ad-lib for this but oh well. And... should I do an english version for Promise U too? Haha. I should put up a poll huh? Haha but anyways, I hope you guys enjoy it. And LINK IS HERE or HERE. smile.gif

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Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)

I feel the air surrounds me
The light is shining on me
But everybody's passing by me on and on and on and on
The melody is running
Somebody come and save me
I see you standing there, let's talk, play and love

I'll hold you in my arms (Anywhere you go)
I'll believe in you (Anywhere you go)
I will never let you go (Stay in me)
You can talk, you can play, you can love

I'm trapped inside, no where to go
The sudden darkness just envelopes me inside
Trying to breathe in and out, in and out
But I held my breath when the sadness washed in
But music she saved my life,
So I'm loving her through day and night
Even if everything changes and I'm alone then
Hey it's alright

Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)

If all things changes just remember
You can talk, you can play, you can love
If everybody goes away and leave you
It's okay I will be by your side

One, two, three and four, I'll go anywhere you go
One, two, three and four, I'll go anywhere you go
One, two, three and four, I'll go anywhere you go
One, two, three, and four, Anyband huh! Let's go!

I'll hold you in my arms (Anywhere you go)
I'll believe in you (Anywhere you go)
I will never let you go (Stay in me)
You can talk, you can play, you can love

Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there (Anywhere you wanna go)

All that you hope and wish
Hold it inside your heart
Grab my hand
And let's reach out for that dream
Let's go

Anywhere you go, I will follow where you go
Anywhere you go, I will follow where you go
Anywhere you go, I will follow where you go
Anywhere you go. (Anywhere you go)

Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there. (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there. (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there. (Anywhere you wanna go)
Anywhere you go, anywhere you go, anywhere you go, I'll be there. (Anywhere you wanna go)


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Posted 21 November 2007 - 11:55 AM

i think it sounds pretty good, but then it's better if you had raised the volume because it was sorta hard to hear, the quality wasn't that great. but nice lyrics (:
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Posted 21 November 2007 - 05:08 PM

Ohh! i like the first half! xDD
well done, just like what x3wendy,
couldnt really hear your voice. xDD
you should write for the whole song!
id like to hear it. ^^
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Posted 23 November 2007 - 05:59 AM

Hello, I've updated the link. See first post.

x3wendy: Yep, I've reduced the volume of the instrumental, hope you can hear it more clearly now. Yeah, the quality is blah. I don't really have a good mic. Oh well... thanks for your comment. smile.gif

stripesoflove: Yup, I guess I'll write the whole song. But it might take some time. And thanks for your comment. smile.gif


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Posted 24 November 2007 - 07:09 PM

i think it sounds really nice :]
oh! and i like your voice ^^
can't wait for the full version!!
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Posted 24 November 2007 - 08:51 PM

WOOW!
your really goooddd!
its just kinda annoy that at times you can hear the mic blow up..
if you know what i mean.
but you have a really good voice!
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 07:13 PM

whoa! i liked that...but it was a little weird on some parts.
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Posted 27 November 2007 - 07:36 AM

UPDATED! See first post.

BU_RP: Yeah, the mic blows up and stuff since the mic I have is horrible. sad.gif but anyways, thanks for your comments smile.gif

Aesthetic_Chinese: Hmm.. weird? Which part? Haha. But I'm glad you liked it. smile.gif


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Posted 27 November 2007 - 06:32 PM

how r u supposed to listen to it? it's not working 4 me...i have Safari and Firefox...is that a problem?
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Posted 28 November 2007 - 08:43 AM

^You can't listen to it? Weird. I'm using firefox too, there's no problem. Hmm... do you want me to upload it somewhere else?

EDIT. HERE smile.gif


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Posted 28 November 2007 - 11:12 PM

omg i love ur lyrics..xD ur talented!!
too bad it was hard to hear ur voice..the quality wasn't tht good.. but from wht i heard..ur voice is nice !
Wah!! i wanna hear ur voice..
u should re-record it again so i can hear ur voice..
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Posted 29 November 2007 - 06:46 PM

OHHH!! So pretty! happy.gif ur talented
i hear some *pff* in ur recording xD
any who it was awsome <3
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Posted 29 November 2007 - 07:21 PM

its really good
but like its not clear >. <
if you make it alittle more clearer, i think it'd be good
and have more power in your voice[:<
goodjob ^-^
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted 30 November 2007 - 12:51 PM

UPDATED, see first post.

Lilvi3t1314: Yup, I re-recorded it. I hope you like it. Thanks for your comment. smile.gif

xNanciix: Yeah, there were a lot of *pfft*s. Haha. But I hope there isn't much in the newer one now. Thanks for your comment. smile.gif

xflyy: Hmm.. well... I've quite a lazy voice so... yeah. Haha. But I'll keep your comment in mind and try to put more power in my voice. Anyways, thanks for your comment. smile.gif


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Posted 30 November 2007 - 03:24 PM

Oh my golli. I'm loving this!!^^
Gee, i love your tone. You have that attitude-sounding tone to go perfectly w/ this song.
Love your lyrics actually. They're awesomely cool and stuck w/ the idea.*
I really liked your rapping. So goood!^^
And i have a thing for background singing. So i thought you did a really nice job @ 3:57 w/ that. tongue.gif omg, is that you?? haha
Very nice job! I just wished that the quality would've been better. You can just work on that and the bridge w/ the higher notes (though i understand you have a low voice, which is nice!). happy.gif
Other than that, i really enjoyed it!^^ post more! =)
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Posted 30 November 2007 - 07:45 PM

QUOTE (qweeererooqweer @ Nov 30 2007, 02:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lilvi3t1314: Yup, I re-recorded it. I hope you like it. Thanks for your comment. smile.gif

yeh!! this is sho much clearer!! ^^ i can hear ur voice now laugh.gif
when u sang this part
"All that you hope and wish
Hold it inside your heart
Grab my hand
And let's reach out for that dream
Let's go"
i love how at the end how u sang "let's go" it went from high to strong....
i think thats really nice..x] i love when u sang high..lol actually i like ur voice.. biggrin.gif
oh btw..wht kind of program do u use for mixing? cant wait for more of ur singing ^^ i'm lookn forward in it..


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Posted 02 December 2007 - 06:22 PM

oh my god.. this is so good... i like the lyrics so much.
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Posted 04 December 2007 - 09:54 AM

songie_ryugirl: Yeah, that's me at 3:57 haha. I'm glad you liked the lyrics, I tried to stick to the same meaning as the original Korean lyrics. Yeah, the quality isn't that good cuz I was stuck with a horrible mic. Haha and the bridge part... actually I wanted to redo it for it to be better but I thought "Heck, I'm too lazy." so yeah.. haha. Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment. smile.gif

Lilvi3t1314: I use Audacity, but I didn't really use their effect stuff, I just used it for recording. But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for your comment. smile.gif

VindictusDame: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment. smile.gif


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Posted 05 December 2007 - 06:53 PM

i want to download it!
i love it!
so cool!
i love itttttt
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Posted 06 December 2007 - 11:38 PM

I really like the rearranged/editted lyrics.
The rap is very note worthy.
When you sang it, it had a more R&B touch to it.
I loved it, by far the best TPL fan version I have heard so far.

But the part that stood out the most was towards the end, when you sang BoA's solo part.
Although your voice didn't go as high as BoA's it was still effective.

Some parts in the song sound attitude forced though. unsure.gif

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