[bands182]

haaaaaaaaaaa ok so havent been really singing much til really really recently!
Please give me some feedback, i really want to improve!
Im trying to sing a variety of songs to see what my vocals can handle[and not handle].......so im still at quite an experimental stage.
If you think of a song which my voice might be suitable for please say so!

These arent the best recordings since i use my camera to record then convert them into mp3s AND the fact that i havent practiced these songs much.

Also please ignore the many random sample clips that are below, theyre my audition clips for collabs [very rough].

Sorry if I break your eardrums.

xx Ali

edit: eek the link wont work....lets see if just plain posting the URL will work...:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=734506

[CtlunatC]

AHH!!!! THE LINK WONT WORK!!!!!

okay!!

woah.. for reflection did you like... speed it up?? lol cuz it sounds so cute!! ALVIN AND THE CHIPMUNKS!! from what i can tell it sounds pretty but let me hear your voice!!!

Heaven was pretty but.. it was in chip munk voice!! leme hear you man! lol

[bands182]

AHH!!!! THE LINK WONT WORK!!!!!

okay!!

woah.. for reflection did you like... speed it up?? lol cuz it sounds so cute!! ALVIN AND THE CHIPMUNKS!! from what i can tell it sounds pretty but let me hear your voice!!!

Heaven was pretty but.. it was in chip munk voice!! leme hear you man! lol

hahah luna you made the same mistake as you did last time!!
Click on "play Lo-fi" then it comes out normally..if you just click on it..i think it plays it high-fi which speeds it up for some odd reason....

^^

[CtlunatC]

oh really!! i made that mistake before??? haha wooops!!!

edit...

HEY IT IS SLOWER! LOL okay time to listen *listens*

ahh reflection is pretty.... you got nice pitch. i wish i had control of pitch ahah.

i think for the spice girls song you could have some more emotion cuz it sounds monotone abit. your voice is so soft hehe like a featha!!! *waves one around*

Heaven was good lol, the softness of your voice matched it well XD

GOOD JOB!!!

[ImperfectionEmbodied]

Hi, there~! As soon as I got your comment, I came! =]


You have a nice tone, and it sounded very pretty~ =) You're on pitch most of the time, but on some notes, you're going kind of flat, I think? So make sure to lift your soft palate so you can hit those notes dead-on! ^-^

Hm...on some of the notes, it feels like your straining? The high notes, that is, and if you feel like you can't hit that note strongly in a full voice, then try using your falsetto voice. It kind of adds your own flavor into as well, and this song especially would sound nice if it had some falsetto (just not the whole thing, of course XD).

By the way, dear, is English your first language? I'm just wondering because you had some accent XD For me, I was like, somehow, this makes it sound "authentic" XD;;


And, as a final note, PLAY WITH IT! You don't sound dead, of course, but add even more emotion into it! Have fun and add your own flavor into the song....kind of like....make it yours.


All in all, you sounded pretty to me, dear~ <3333 Record some more and keep improving yourself and you'll do even better next time! And if you ever want me to give you some advice again, just leave a comment on my page (if I don't see it here, first) =)

EDIT: That was for the song Reflection! XD;; I'll go listen to the other ones now~!

Your voice sounds so nice in Heaven XD So soft and light-toned (sometimes I really wish that I had a lighter tone than a heavy voice @__@).

Try working on making your voice a little stronger. Breathe using your diaphragm (or however you spell it XD). =)

As for my earlier comment about the high notes, it seems that you're only going a little flat on the high notes in Reflection~