[MzImperfectshun]

UNFINISHED CLIP. ONLY ABOUT A MINUTE AND A HALF OF THE SONG.

THIS IS MY FIRST PERFORMERS POST @ SOOMPI.
I'M NEW TO RECORDING & MIXING SO I DIDN'T DO A VERY GOOD JOB.
ALSO, I MADE QUITE A FEW MISTAKES & HAVE BAD PRONUNCIATION, BUT I TRIED. IT'S ONLY MY SECOND ATTEMPT AT "RAPPING." I SING A LOT THOUGH.

SOUNDCLICK.

COMMENTS & CRITICISM ARE WELCOMED.

[floppy.pocky]

Rating: 1/5 (Floppy)

Rating: 1/5 (Pocky)

We'll credit you for trying the rap bit rather than leaving it blank like some people do. We'll critique you without taking the rap into consideration. You've got some potential, but you just need alot of practice and ask yourself is this what you really enjoy? And push for it. Work for it. Nothing's free in life. We can help you, just give us a PM whenever you need help or just do a reply on this thread. We don't have the time to comment properly at the moment, but we will come back soon.
- Floppy&Pocky

[MzImperfectshun]

Rating: 1/5 (Floppy)

Rating: 1/5 (Pocky)

We'll credit you for trying the rap bit rather than leaving it blank like some people do. We'll critique you without taking the rap into consideration. You've got some potential, but you just need alot of practice and ask yourself is this what you really enjoy? And push for it. Work for it. Nothing's free in life. We can help you, just give us a PM whenever you need help or just do a reply on this thread. We don't have the time to comment properly at the moment, but we will come back soon.
- Floppy&Pocky

THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE. IS THIS WHAT I REALLY ENJOY? YES IT IS. DO I WANT TO MAKE A LIVING OFF OF IT? I DON'T THINK I CAN. HAHA. ALL IN ALL, I RLY DO ENJOY SINGING AND WOULD LIKE TO GET BETTER @ IT. I DO NEED A LOT OF PRACTICE, BUT I DON'T RLY KNOW WHAT TO DO TO BE A BETTER SINGER. I'VE NEVER TAKEN ANY LESSONS OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT AND NO ONE I KNOW AROUND ME CAN RLY HELP EITHER. IT'LL BE GREAT IF I COULD GET SOME HELP. ^__^

[A.lee]

i thought it was pretty good n_n
just need to match up with the instrumental - you were a bit faster than the instrumental.

[ritzy!]

the rapping wasn't that bad and i liked the singing.. o_o; dunno what they're talkin' bout..
anywhoos.. when you get to the higher parts i think you should just be a bit smoother otherwisee,
good jobbb

[MzImperfectshun]

i thought it was pretty good n_n
just need to match up with the instrumental - you were a bit faster than the instrumental.

HAHA. THAT WAS PROBABLY THE BAD MIXING. I'M STILL LEARNING. LOL.

the rapping wasn't that bad and i liked the singing.. o_o; dunno what they're talkin' bout..
anywhoos.. when you get to the higher parts i think you should just be a bit smoother otherwisee,
good jobbb

THANKS. I'LL KEEP THAT IN MIND. =)

[r0mantisteg0ist]

i though it was pretty good too ^^
i'm just on my way to do a... third remake of this with a friend XDD

yours sounds a lot cuter than ours will ~
esp the rap. very happy XD
good job with the singing too.

just watch pronounciations when rapping and stuff ~

[MzImperfectshun]

i though it was pretty good too ^^
i'm just on my way to do a... third remake of this with a friend XDD

yours sounds a lot cuter than ours will ~
esp the rap. very happy XD
good job with the singing too.

just watch pronounciations when rapping and stuff ~

I HAD SUCH A HARD TIME WITH THE RAP!!! LOL. IT RLY IS DIFFICULT FOR ME ESP. WHEN I DON'T RAP & I DON'T KNOW THE LANGUAGE. HAHA. ALL IN ALL, THANKS. =)
IF YOU POST YOUR THIRD REMAKE, I'LL BE SURE TO LISTEN TO IT. ^__^

[la.la.la]

i thought you were really good too!!
i really liked your singing
and your rapping was good considering GD can go crazy

[MzImperfectshun]

HAHA. THANK YOU. ^__^
GD CAN GO CRAZY ALRIGHT, BUT IT'S OKAY. HE'S SUCH A CUTIE. HAHA.

[floppy.pocky]

THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE. IS THIS WHAT I REALLY ENJOY? YES IT IS. DO I WANT TO MAKE A LIVING OFF OF IT? I DON'T THINK I CAN. HAHA. ALL IN ALL, I RLY DO ENJOY SINGING AND WOULD LIKE TO GET BETTER @ IT. I DO NEED A LOT OF PRACTICE, BUT I DON'T RLY KNOW WHAT TO DO TO BE A BETTER SINGER. I'VE NEVER TAKEN ANY LESSONS OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT AND NO ONE I KNOW AROUND ME CAN RLY HELP EITHER. IT'LL BE GREAT IF I COULD GET SOME HELP. ^__^

Rating: 1/5 (Floppy)

Rating: 1/5 (Pocky)

Ok, we're back. We'll stand by what we said before in the last comment. Before even thinking or beginning to improve your singing, you need to change your mindset. You "already" think you aren't good enough. That there, already itself, will pull you down without you knowing. First step is to "believe" you can sing, then second is to really focus and practice on singing. Practice with songs that aren't so fast-paced and songs that exert your voice more that helps develop your voice and technique in singing. Try practicing songs from: LJH, Mariah Carey, Whitney Houston and etc.
- Floppy&Pocky

[MzImperfectshun]

Rating: 1/5 (Floppy)

Rating: 1/5 (Pocky)

Ok, we're back. We'll stand by what we said before in the last comment. Before even thinking or beginning to improve your singing, you need to change your mindset. You "already" think you aren't good enough. That there, already itself, will pull you down without you knowing. First step is to "believe" you can sing, then second is to really focus and practice on singing. Practice with songs that aren't so fast-paced and songs that exert your voice more that helps develop your voice and technique in singing. Try practicing songs from: LJH, Mariah Carey, Whitney Houston and etc.
- Floppy&Pocky

HAHA. OK THANKS. ^__^ THIS WAS ACTUALLY ONE OF THE VERY FEW FAST-PACED SONGS THAT I'VE DONE. HAHA. I'VE TRIED MARIAH CAREY & WHITNEY HOUSTON SONGS BEFORE. THEY ARE VERY HARD, BUT I WILL WORK @ IT. ^__^