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#1 User is offline   DK. 

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Posted 03 January 2008 - 10:44 PM

Happy New Year's everyone. this song was originally going to be for an EP (Living.In.Full.Effect. vol. 1) but i doubt i will pull through on that, so here is just another recording of mine.. it's short, just something i had to get off my chest.

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I was another sucker, struck with love,
I buckled up, for the long haul, it was the wrong call, but had to suck it up,
Maybe it was fun and games, maybe it was done in vain,
Baby I cant numb the pain, its really something strange,
Even sunny days of mine have begun to rain,
I was in denial, kept a smile, thinking nothing changed,
But boy was I wrong, our bond was on a downfall,
It was so tense, it stretched out like a nylon,
Now your memory, severs me, it never seems,
To ever leave, my head, everywhere, like an Ipod,
So I pause.. to gather my thoughts,
You know because.. together I thought,
We would make it, especially with the progress we were making,
Thought our hearts laid adjacent, but I was so mistaken,
Now the reasons are clear, it mustve been fear,
That we wanted someone dear, but we werent being sincere,
I got the blues, playing Wu, cause my 'heart gently weeps',
And now my body feels empty cause you were the centerpiece,
We werent meant to be, like the scent of weed, it was obvious,
Wore my heart on my sleeve, now its throbbing up,
So I gotta just, hold on, be strong enough,
To move on, I gotta strong arm love,
And let you go, so I can start heeling,
So this feeling, isnt perpetual

as always, any c/c's at all appreciated.. thanks and have a nice day.
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Posted 04 January 2008 - 07:47 AM

mini cooper son... u;ve gotten better then me now.. i cant write lyrics anymore or flow that well anymore... everytime i listen to a new track u keep elevating. the beat is dope .. its got that mc sniper vibe to it ... the line that stood out most to me was "like the scent of weed, it was obvious," haha i like that .. anyways the energy and charisma in your delivery was very good for what you had to say .. i;m feeling it...

oh and if u can do me a favor and hit up my thread some where on this thing that would be great.. i dont get the same love like i used to on soompi

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Posted 04 January 2008 - 08:20 AM

Oo DK. That was sick. I loved how it flowed o____o; Daaiiim. Good stuff ~ loved your rapping voice too.
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Posted 04 January 2008 - 12:06 PM

Like always I'm quite clueless but the meaning's always striking and your delivery's always high strung with emotion/energy/sounds like you mean it. 'And now my body feels empty cause you were the centerpiece' <-- I really liked that line
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Posted 04 January 2008 - 01:09 PM

i like your rapping... style? ^^
very powerful XD
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Posted 04 January 2008 - 05:04 PM

Emotional rap.
I like it. ^^

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Posted 05 January 2008 - 01:36 PM

thanks yall. appreciate you guys being open-minded and for any comments. and starforme for always supporting me smile.gif

sweetslove - i tried to find a recent thread made by you, but didnt see any. anyhow, i clicked on ur soundclick to give you a listen. sweet voice. i listened to love is. very soothing.

kenji - thanks man, i appreciate that. i would hope that i keep elevating.. even tho i take like 3 month breaks between each recording now haha.
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Posted 05 January 2008 - 01:42 PM

Aww thnx for making the effort to listen to me! actually I have one on the second page tongue.gif It needs a bump hehe x] it's called "Tell me!"
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Posted 05 January 2008 - 04:43 PM

you`re amazing. ohmy.gif
aww too bad it`s so short >.<

i love your emotion. i lack in that area....

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Posted 05 January 2008 - 06:06 PM

good job xD
that's a nice song, i like it ^^
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Posted 05 January 2008 - 06:37 PM

awesome rappers make my day....
yeah you definitely just made my day hahahah

love the emotion ^-^

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