[Jang_Yoon_Jung ^ ^]

Ok...I posted a topic about this before yesterday in the general discussion but nobody replied : P
Wrong place to post, I know ><;;;
But now I'm finished with the assignment, and I want to know if anyone has anything else I can add.
The more the better, right? xD
Oh. and some information about the assignment....

This is the assignment:
Prepare a resume for George Washington as if he were applying for the job of U.S. president. Be sure to provide a record of his qualifications and experience that would make him the right person for the job.

And she didn't really help me. ><;; I was absent for the last two days and the only information I got from her besides the directions were to look for examples of a resume on google. I couldn't ask for help from her this week because I was too busy on absence work from the other classes. Now I realize how stupid that was.
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It's 50 points, so I'm panicking....I got help from this Stanford student today at church, but since he was leaving soon all he could help me on was how it should be laid out.

I'm aiming for at least a B+ on this assignment. An A would be great but I just know that isn't going to happen...

So...
HELP ME! xD
I made the categories bold, the skills and experience part in italics and George Washington's name huge on wordpad.
Just check the information and please tell me if you think something's wrong with it, or if I need more
Resume:

GEORGE WASHINGTON
~Objective~
My main reason for wanting to be president is to be able to lead the United States to a better future. I want the United States to be successful under my power.
~Date of Birth~
February 22, 1732
~Education~
-subjects studied includes subjects such as mathematics, surveying, the classics, and " rules of civility".
~Experience~
Commander-in-Chief of Continental Army( 1775 - 1783 )
Skills and Experience From Job
- gained stronger leaderships abilities
- stronger sense of what the Continental Army suffered during the Revolutionary War.
Represenative to the Continental Congress
Skills and Experience From Job
- able to work with others to come to a proficient answer to a problem occuring in the United States.
~Skills~
- able to work with others to make the U.S. a better nation
- strong leadership abilities
- understanding of both rich class and poor class due to being in middle class
~Interests~
- military arts
- western expansion

EDIT: Oh, and we're supposed to pretend we're Washington himself, so that's why I put ' I ' instead of him or Washington in the objective

[Voltage]

this is why i didn't go to public school