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[cover] Sunmin - Only You And Me I seriously need some criticism....

#1 User is offline   CrystalDragon388 

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 08:07 PM

I have just started to sing a while ago.


I really want to send my demos into different entertainments, but I need to reassure myself first that I'm even worthy of sending them in.


Please help me out and critique my stuff, so that I can get better. If you think I really suck, please say so too. ^__^

I also apologize for my Korean: I'm actually Vietnamese.



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#2 User is offline   j00n 

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 08:19 PM

Hi,

I think you definitely have potential. I would hold off sending anything to the companies for now as you'll be flatly rejected. Spend some more time polishing your songs and nailing down the pronunciation. You have good tone in the upper register but tend to flat as you descend, and you bottom out on your lower register. Also, i would try to work on adding some vibrato on your longer notes. Keep working on it!
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Posted 06 February 2008 - 12:08 AM

Your voice sounds a bit weird in this one. I suggest re-recording this song maybe.
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Posted 06 February 2008 - 07:23 AM

I agree with br4d you start to get a little flat I think you sound by atuner from your local music store and practice with it. And higher notes are really good. So keep on practicing don't give up.
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