[bobo33]

Hello!

I know I just 'debuted' a few days ago with Tell Me...THANK YOU for all the comments! But some of you guys were asking for a ballad, so here you go. It's an old recording, I think from last September or so. But I'd still like to hear your opinions on it

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=802276
Dang, I hope the link works. I've been having problems with Soundclick!
THE ARTIST PAGE DISAPPEARS AFTER ONE DAY
And that link just leads to Sounclick.com I think. ARGH.
I wonder how you guys listen to it o__o no problems?

My own comments:
I should, by right, sound better than Tell Me in this. Since it's in my voice range and I'm more comfortable with it~
But this is from long time ago so things might have changed, Idk. =x

If you guys manage to hear it, please comment!
And if you can't open the link or whatnot, please leave a comment so I know and can try to fix it asap...
Would be best if you guys could help me with it too xD

Happy Chinese New Year all, let's begin this year with a blast!

[Yukari]

woo nice voice but timing is a bit off sometimes and i think it's not mixing but singing O.o also your pronunciation is a bit odd ^^'' but i really like you soothing voice <3 good job!

[bobo33]

thank you for the comment!
i didn't know my pronunciation was that bad...i'll work on it now that you've mentioned. ^^

[AstralDragon]

I think you have a nice voice. This type of song suits your voice much more than something like "Tell me". However; I noticed in the second chorus you went a little flat during the "Everyday, everynight, with you" part, so just watch out. Your pronunciation was a little bit funky at times, so just make sure you really study the lyrics. Other than that, I really enjoyed listening your cover. It was really peaceful and pretty!

[ana_ari_007]

You have a very low, sweet and husky tone to your voice. It's not overwhelming and it can be powerful. I think a little more practice with the language and a bit more projection will make your song better. Some of the high parts I hear you're having a little difficulty reaching. Especially the 'ima' part at around 3:17 of the song during the crescendo. It's hard singing guy parts when you're a girl becuase there's differences in tonality. It's not impossible and you do a very good job with this song. Like I said, a bit more pracite and a bit more projection. When you have those down comfortably, it will go a long way. I like your rendition though, it's well done.

[bobo33]

thanks for the comments.
i suck at controlling my voice as of now. but i'll practise to get better
about pronunciation...i guess i'll just have to listen to more japanese/kor songs? although this isn't my biggest concern when it comes to singing.
oh and AstralDragon... i think i know you XD

thank you!!