[Dirtycash23]

Me dancing to Hit This Party it's my first post
constructive criticism ....... so please comment and tell me what you think
......oh yea and I'm thinking about trying out for YG!!!...





"Lexy hit this Party!! ft.Kim Ji Eun"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ilfv53E7AkM

[Yukari]

Lies:
i thought it would be the actually routine but it's just random dancing ^^

well it's ok i guess although looks quite chaotic to me. You should work on waves more because i can see you love to do them but the endings of them are kinda weird xD anyway you look quite cool! dance more!

Lexy's song:
woo this one was much cooler. It seems that you felt music better in this one! Nice job!

[divinexoath]

I think it's pretty good! You seem to favor your right arm, though; it does most of the moves. Try to level that out a little. I mean your left arm needs something to do, too! =3

2:26 was AWESOME by the way. O=!!

Also, I see that you said you want to be a KPOPstar. If that's the case, make sure your dance moves are big and pronounced. If you were performing on stage, the people waaaay in the back would want at least an idea of what's going on, so you gotta make the moves as easy to see as possible. Mostly you were good with that, but there were some parts that were too "small" (can't think of another word), and some parts that just needed to be a liiiittle more prounounced.

Otherwise, awesome! =D