Posted 06 February 2008 - 05:57 PM
I think it's pretty good! You seem to favor your right arm, though; it does most of the moves. Try to level that out a little. I mean your left arm needs something to do, too! =3
2:26 was AWESOME by the way. O=!!
Also, I see that you said you want to be a KPOPstar. If that's the case, make sure your dance moves are big and pronounced. If you were performing on stage, the people waaaay in the back would want at least an idea of what's going on, so you gotta make the moves as easy to see as possible. Mostly you were good with that, but there were some parts that were too "small" (can't think of another word), and some parts that just needed to be a liiiittle more prounounced.
Otherwise, awesome! =D