[divinexoath]

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And here's the MV of it so you can compare for crits: Jaja Uma Paradaisu MV

A NOTE...
So I started singing this and then my mom was like, "Go get food for us." 'Cause she, my dad, and my bro are all sick. So I went and got their food, ate, and when I came back upstairs to finish, suddenly my eyes hurt, my throat hurt, and I felt really tired. So that's why the singing suddenly starts getting kind of tired and the voices don't sound the same, and it's also why I cut if off where I did (the chorus is DERN HARD TO SING).

Also.

Which girl do I sound best as? Rika (the first one), Erika (the deepest & second one), or Yui (the last one).

Comments and crits are loooove~

[Nihonjin_berryz]

I think you sound more like YUI. I dont really have any commments you did good.