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#1 User is offline   NymphoeniX 

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Posted 09 February 2008 - 09:53 PM

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thanks for listen

and.......... feedback plsss happy.gif;


**I've remove the Echo~~~**
I think it's better ..maybe just a little ,,but still quite unclear. -^^-

ThAnKs for all ComMents ^^

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Posted 10 February 2008 - 07:32 PM

Yeah, i've been meaning to ask who sung JunSoo's part in this version so ppl could credit him properly. smile.gif

Hmm.. I don't know if it's your mic or mixing effects, but i can't hear you clearly @ all.
His voice dominates more in the chorus too sad.gif .
I don't think this song fits your range just yet. I hear a lot of breakage in your notes and extension of notes.
Need more support and control with flow as well sweatingbullets.gif ..
You were off-pitch in the bridge when you yell..
But i liked how you sounded w/ the line @ 3:45 ("We both agree~)!! happy.gif
I think you have a lot of potential though!! And maybe it was your mixing effects or mic..
I really couldn't hear you well @ all. It sounded... blurry..?? >_< Idk.
But keep practicing!!!!!! Hope to hear more from you later!! biggrin.gif biggrin.gif
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#3 User is offline   NymphoeniX 

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Posted 11 February 2008 - 06:12 PM

thanks for ur comment

ah... I think clearness is about my mic and my position when recording
I think I sound very shrill and yeah I off too much in this song huh...
have to practice more... more.... thanks for the point that I must consider as well happy.gif
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Posted 14 February 2008 - 03:47 PM

It's sound nice. The guy sing very nicely. His singing sound more clearer than yours. sad.gif It sound like you are singing into a cup or something. I mean with the echo, so maybe next time aim for a clearer sound.
(^__^'') I'm not trying to be mean here so I'm very sorry if it hurt you in any way. sad.gif I think you can certainly sing. You have potential, but you lack confidences. Have more confidences in yourself and your voice. smile.gif Keep it up with the practicing and Good luck ne.
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Posted 14 February 2008 - 05:53 PM

um ur voice sound echo-y 'cause of ur mic i think o.O
anyways...
i think you have a pretty voice =]
u sound breathy tho(i think?)
great job<3 and keep it up

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 07:20 PM

QUOTE (Oome @ Feb 14 2008, 05:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's sound nice. The guy sing very nicely. His singing sound more clearer than yours. sad.gif It sound like you are singing into a cup or something. I mean with the echo, so maybe next time aim for a clearer sound.
(^__^'') I'm not trying to be mean here so I'm very sorry if it hurt you in any way. sad.gif I think you can certainly sing. You have potential, but you lack confidences. Have more confidences in yourself and your voice. smile.gif Keep it up with the practicing and Good luck ne.

happy.gif thanks for ur comment... I'm sure I'll re-do this song again coz' I think it isn't clear too and... my singings terrible in this song...
the guy sound really nice and it's contrast me... haha I think about find s'one suit my voice to collab too coz' I can't sing nicely as him but I have mic problem ~~low quality very sensitive, and huhhh, another one I have is AC interfere sound so obvious but I think quality's better and also lack of free time -*-
anyway thanks for ur recommend I'll fix it as I can ^^
QUOTE (xNanciix @ Feb 14 2008, 07:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
um ur voice sound echo-y 'cause of ur mic i think o.O
anyways...
i think you have a pretty voice =]
u sound breathy tho(i think?)
great job<3 and keep it up

thank u.. I think my voice isn't suit to this song and I always sound very nervous when I sing this song

so... if s'one can recommend about to sing the song like this plssss tell ^^
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Posted 14 February 2008 - 09:55 PM

I think you're singing your solo part too airy.
This kind of song is better with a full, strong sound.
You're also cutting off a lot of the words, rather than holding them out long.
On the "We both agree" before the bridge, you're kinda suppose to go up & then back down.
On "Oh, baby it's timeless," your top note sounded kinda flat. Maybe it was the mic or maybe not.
Yeah, I'd recommend that you sing a lower pitched song. Or maybe some cute pop. (;

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 10:25 PM

it sounds like your whispering/ singing very low
may be ur mic's problem
you cant reach the high notes..
the dude sounded great (no offense)
maybe this isn't the song for ya

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