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Stand By Me constructive criticism please!..i need it badly

#1 User is offline   carla03 

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Posted 15 February 2008 - 08:11 AM

....please comment once u open this ...hehehe

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Posted 18 February 2008 - 04:46 PM

first off... i'm sorry if i'm harsh to you.

your timing's really off...
and your notes are all over the place...

and... i'm not sure about this but i think you didn't got the lyrics right as well.

practice more&& listen more to the song~ ^^

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 01:42 AM

QUOTE (THEyoochunSTALKER @ Feb 18 2008, 06:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
first off... i'm sorry if i'm harsh to you.

your timing's really off...
and your notes are all over the place...

and... i'm not sure about this but i think you didn't got the lyrics right as well.

practice more&& listen more to the song~ ^^

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yeah ryt..honestly, i made up my own tune..too bad..hehe...
but i'll do practice it..thanks for response!..i appreciate it a lot!:D
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