[IaMsEo]

officially missing you

i tried to put a lot of confident in this.... and it came out pretty good, imo, but i want to hear what you guys think of it.

for better quality, listen with ear phones. ^^; comments and critiques are welcomed.


from the comments so far, i guess i should resing it... so i'll update later.

thanks to those who commented.

[ritzy!]

you gotta watch out for the parts where the notes are a bit longer and changes
like "go" "escape" or w/e, you tend to go offtune with those~ (except for the 'today' which was nicely done imo ^^)
aw man, i was expecting the OOOOOOOOH~~~ caynt nobody do it like yooooh~~

[MangoJuice]

you gotta work on your vibratto. sounds like youre trying hard. but you don't want to sound like youre trying. you wanna be on point. you were on the right key so that was good. work on style too if you want to be distinct from the rest. good job. keep working at it.

[zkunninglookz]

um..to be honest, i didnt really like it..i mean, u were on key mostly, but u didn't make the song sound sad enough...sounded too loud...or maybe a little too high?