[bobo33]

Hey guys!

I recorded this about a month ago, but I'm only posting it now.
I really like this song ~^^ but forgive me for pronunciation and any mistakes in the lyrics, because I learned and recorded this in a really short time >< (if not i'll never get the chance to, because of BUSY SCHOOL )

Honestly, I think it was really not the best I could do, I mean all my recordings are pretty much rushed out because I don't have time But I'd still love your comments, thanks!

My own comments on the recording:
-There are so many ad libs! But it was fun recording them ^^
-Gave up with trying to harmonise the chorus, if I have time in future, I might wanna redo this
-Screwed up the first chorus, I went off-key and I know it Will definitely fix it when I get the time to redo this
-Screwed up Min's high note, but hey, not everyone has a crazy range like him so... I forgive myself for that ^^
-RAPPING IS FUN I tried to do the girly voice effect, but I think I overdid it, it sounds too high pitched and childish ><
-I LIKE THE BRIDGE.
-I was trying to make the front part (Yoochun's part) sound sexy. o__o I think I failed, lol.
-A random clicking sound at the end; please ignore.

People say I sound better in ballads and other slow songs and I should sing those, but I'd still like to try dance songs because they're fun and exciting and I hope that by singing more fast songs I can improve in what I'm weak in. And besides, singing is for enjoyment, so we should just sing anything we like! =D

PURPLE LINE.

[purplefanatic]

I really like your voice
the first bit sounds really dull when you said "now, i see this way. it looks like purple line"
it got better towards the end of the song when you got into the song
some mistakes with pronunciation but other than that it was good =]
nice job

[Genesis]

Hey I thought relativeley the same as ^. I do think you have a great voice that just needs a little sanding round the edges. Your pronounciation wasn't too too bad. You rapping was definatley cute xD ♥
Keep working on it! ♥

[kookiemonstar]

I love your rap =D Sounds great. But the beginning I agree with purplefanatic in that the beginning sounded bored and leading into the song you sounded a bit nervous because you left some syllables hanging for too long but towards the end was fantastic. Esp the rap, lol haha loving the rap!!

[emceej]

woah i love how you rap
your voice is deep too so the first part, i couldn't understand what you were saying. it sounded kinda dead.
but it was pretty good

[PorXu]

Wao ,your soul is good but low , the trust

[jaejoongBBYx]

good job :] I dont think I would've been able to
do that, hah. I sound ubber weird =/
hah, it does sound like you have a stuffy nose o-o;
is it juss the recording?

[bobo33]

thank you for the comments, i'm rather pleasantly surprised!
yeah i realised that i sound duller in the beginning too, i enjoy the second verse onwards more ^^
the rap was really fun to do!!

jaejoongBBYx i do? sometimes i sound nasal, i think. maybe i am, a little, but when i hear myself i don't hear it! i can't remember if i was sick during that time though, i did get a fever around that time but i think it was later in the week.

[jaejoongBBYx]

Oh, hah :] Great job tho.
*props ^____^;

[IDpeaceBoA46]

People say I sound better in ballads and other slow songs and I should sing those, but I'd still like to try dance songs because they're fun and exciting and I hope that by singing more fast songs I can improve in what I'm weak in. And besides, singing is for enjoyment, so we should just sing anything we like! =D

Don't listen to people, my singing teacher says it's always better to go out of you're "I'm better at this zone" that's the only way you can bet better.

the backup's a bit loud but overall it's verry good^.^
+i think you were atraining on changmin's parts at the end also...

[&._Euphoria]

You did a decent job on this.
I like your voice but I think you can improve on your pronounciation.
This song would be better if you put more energy into it.

Other than that,you're good. =]

[bobo33]

^ Thank you, it seems like i have a lot to work on on pronunciation if i wanna sing japanese songs ^^; i agree about the energy level too, whenever i listen to the original version there's just so much energy and oomph, but i never seem to be able to reach anywhere near that.

IDpeaceBoA46 haha i WAS kinda straining! it was really hard because changmin's range is like MAD, and mine isn't but well... i just thought i'd prefer that to getting away with a falsetto! heh. is there any way to actually increase your range? haha.

[kayzpal]

Man! Your rap was awesome! xD
Me and my friend are listening to this and we both were like "Dang, cool rapping!" Haha...

Your singing voice was nice although to me actually it lacks power sometimes. You strained Changmin's screaming part a bit. xD
Nevertheless, I think this cover is one of the best.
Keep on singing, dear!

Hwaiting!