Posted 04 December 2005 - 08:31 PM
I would really appreciate it if anyone would give me comments on my song? Even though it is not complete T_T
If i get some good feedbacks...den maybe i'll redo the whole song! THanks a bunch!
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Posted 05 December 2005 - 01:31 AM
some of the higher notes of the chorus need to be worked on, also enunciation
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Posted 05 December 2005 - 07:19 AM
QUOTE(NotFromThisPlanet @ Dec 5 2005, 05:31 PM) 
some of the higher notes of the chorus need to be worked on, also enunciation
okie! thanks!
Er... i know i may sound silly...but wut's enunciation?
I've never been to any voice training or anything...so i wouldn't know i guess.. T_T
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Posted 05 December 2005 - 08:10 AM
e·nun·ci·ate ( P ) Pronunciation Key (-nns-t)
v. e·nun·ci·at·ed, e·nun·ci·at·ing, e·nun·ci·ates
v. tr.
To pronounce; articulate.
To state or set forth precisely or systematically: enunciate a doctrine.
To announce; proclaim
v. e·nun·ci·at·ed, e·nun·ci·at·ing, e·nun·ci·ates
v. tr.
To pronounce; articulate.
To state or set forth precisely or systematically: enunciate a doctrine.
To announce; proclaim
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Posted 05 December 2005 - 05:38 PM
i agree. you need to enunciate more. nice voice though.
haha. you have an obvious asian accent.
anywho. i really like this song ^^
haha. you have an obvious asian accent.
anywho. i really like this song ^^
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Posted 14 December 2005 - 07:26 AM
QUOTE(`theQUEEN @ Dec 6 2005, 09:38 AM)
i agree. you need to enunciate more. nice voice though.
haha. you have an obvious asian accent.
anywho. i really like this song ^^
LOL Yea I'm asian..ohoohohoho~
well i'll try to ganbate more i suppose >_<
Anyways, thanks!
And also thanks to NotFromThisPlanet for the ...the stuff
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Posted 16 December 2005 - 04:59 PM
its really sweet
theres a bit where it sounds like u want to go higher but u dont...does that make sense?
theres a bit where it sounds like u want to go higher but u dont...does that make sense?
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