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Did this literally like ten minutes after I woke up. My throat was dry like nobody's business, so like the whole time my eyes were watering 'cause I was trying not to cough. So if I get the lyrics wrong in places (which I'm sure I do), it's because the screen looked all blurry behind the tears. xD
Comments, crits, anything? I reeeally wanna improve my singing! =D
Edit ;; By the way. I used that one instrumental with the guy vocals already in it. So credit for that goes to that guy, whoever he is. GUY, WHEREVER YOU ARE, YOU TOTALLY ROCK. 'Cause I don't like singing like a man. So I'm glad you did it for me. Gracias. x3
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#2
Posted 18 March 2008 - 01:22 PM
maybe next time you should try singing later in the day.
i hate when there's a seemingly interesting story but i can't read through it because the writing is SO. BAD.
#3
Posted 18 March 2008 - 02:02 PM
you have a very good voice quality
but it doesnt flow much when you sing ri in's parts
try to pull the notes longer, and match the way she sings it more
but anyways
not bad not bad ^^
but it doesnt flow much when you sing ri in's parts
try to pull the notes longer, and match the way she sings it more
but anyways
not bad not bad ^^
#4
Posted 18 March 2008 - 02:07 PM
where'd you get the instrumental???
please pm me the link

the guy singing is rly good. almost as good as junsu :3
ur voice does sound like it's dry ^^;
try breathing more, and work on your tune, cuz you're out of tune a lot.
and work on your vibratos, make them like.... longer, dunno how to explain ^^:;;
please pm me the link
the guy singing is rly good. almost as good as junsu :3
ur voice does sound like it's dry ^^;
try breathing more, and work on your tune, cuz you're out of tune a lot.
and work on your vibratos, make them like.... longer, dunno how to explain ^^:;;
#5
Posted 18 March 2008 - 03:04 PM
Um... nice try.
You should definitely try to sing it some other time of the day.
The entire time you weren't in tune... and you kept fluctuating between different keys.... it was much less than spectacular.
You should definitely try to sing it some other time of the day.
The entire time you weren't in tune... and you kept fluctuating between different keys.... it was much less than spectacular.

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#6
Posted 18 March 2008 - 05:14 PM
I'd say you were really unsteady and really off key
Remember:
Drink plenty of water (its best if its a tad warm)
Have good posture
Practice your scales daily (helps eliminate)
Do breathing exercises
- Oh just so you know, theres not a single person that sounds better in the morning because while youre a sleep, youre vocal chords haven't been used. If you need to sing in the morning, remember to get yourself wide awake and do plenty of vocal warm ups.
Avoid:
trying to sound pretty, you should sing the way you speak
I know vibrato is something people want to incorporate into their singing, however I feel like online performance forums such as soompi put way too much emphasis on it. It's something you achieve naturally through correct breathing, so until then - avoid trembling yourself to force out something that wouldnt pass as vibrato
Singing so that you sound steady sounds so much better, in fact if you can do it properly, you'll be closer to achieving that vibrato sound
Remember:
Drink plenty of water (its best if its a tad warm)
Have good posture
Practice your scales daily (helps eliminate)
Do breathing exercises
- Oh just so you know, theres not a single person that sounds better in the morning because while youre a sleep, youre vocal chords haven't been used. If you need to sing in the morning, remember to get yourself wide awake and do plenty of vocal warm ups.
Avoid:
trying to sound pretty, you should sing the way you speak
I know vibrato is something people want to incorporate into their singing, however I feel like online performance forums such as soompi put way too much emphasis on it. It's something you achieve naturally through correct breathing, so until then - avoid trembling yourself to force out something that wouldnt pass as vibrato
Singing so that you sound steady sounds so much better, in fact if you can do it properly, you'll be closer to achieving that vibrato sound
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