[simply_dream]

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please delete this thread, thank you!

[ddalgi]

please stick to rapping
your rapping is really good but when you sing,
it sounds like 고음불가
theres something about your pronounciation when you sing thats turns weird

[whatitdo33]

Your pronunciations a little off but you were good =)

[phileunee]

i really loved ur rap!
it was SUPER good!!:]
but i think you should work on the singing parts.
like you were off on a lot of the parts, and the notes werent right.
but other than that i think you did an overall pretty swell job!! ^^

[Denied86]

Ehh.. I agree with the rest, and felt that while your singing was off, your rap totally made up for it lol. You should collab with someone on this. It would sound awesome!

[simply_dream]

@ ddalgi : thanks for listening... ehh, what's 고음불가?

@ whatitdo33 : yess i definitely have to work on that >.< korean is hard to pronounce

@ phileunee : yes yes! must work on the singing parts!!! i think i would sing this better if park bom wasnt in the bg, her voice is just too good for me to follow

@ Denied86 :glad u think my rap made up for the singing hehe... i hope i can do better next time!!! =P

[uhohhitzkc]

i think you should redo this song as a collab with 1 other girl to do the singing parts. it would sound AMAZING!

[elevatormusic]

the opening "ooh" parts were very awkward.

your rapping was better than your singing, like everyone has already mentioned.

[Eider]

rap was good...singing not too much ^^. You should ask someone to sing PB's parts for you. Also... you have a really weird pronunciation ahaha. It's a funny one tho. It doesn't sound that bad...it's just that i'm too picky myself with accents that i can't even stand mine when singing anything xDDD so it's ok. You've done a really good job overall ^^.

[simplicity_x]

I agree with the others. The "oo yeahh" in the beginning was really awkward. =x