Its a clip of my favorite W.H. song. Its from her first album. Ya'll might not know the song but its really great. I love it. So I sang a part of it. Tell how to make it better.
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Singing A Whitney Houston Song.... give me Cc pls.
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Posted 01 April 2008 - 03:39 PM
oh man im a whitney lover but i never heard this song before :x either ways im just going to trust you on this and that you're on key. your voice is beautiful but something seems awkward. im not really sure what it is but i think you need a little more control and just a little bit more strength. don't be afraid to BELT especially since this is a whitney song ^^
"It maybe be normal darling,but I'd rather be natural"
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Posted 01 April 2008 - 05:15 PM
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We're going to be critiquing on your second clip of this song, we won't even bother with the first: that's how bad it is.
For starters, we tell many people not to sing acapella and that goes for you as well. The reason why we tell you to sing with the artist and not instrumental or acapella is because singing with the artist keeps you under-control. You can hear the artist in the background and hence you can try to match their pitch, power and etc.
To make your natural voice sound better, forcefully make your voice a little deeper; when singing. For the time being, this will hide your nasal voice a little and in-time your natural while singing will slowly get rid of the nasal-sound behind it.
From what we can hear and feel, it seems that you aren't singing naturally. It sounds as if you are scared and frantic. You just need to close your eyes, feel the music and just sing calmly. It seems that you're trying to improve or rushing to sing. To improve you cannot rush, it takes alot of time and effort. You need to step back and just sing slowly and calmly. Sing for yourself.
The above is what you should be attempting to improve on. Nothing else.
You also need to work on your flow, control, pitch, power, resonance and etc (pretty much everything). You need to practice alot more than what you are doing. This does not mean just sing and sing for hours, it actually means sing while spotting your errors; fixing one thing after another.
Alot of people find it hard to spot their own errors and correct their own mistakes, that is why you have asked for our help directly. To improve at a much faster rate, add us on msn: floppy.pocky.16.08.07@hotmail.com. Over msn it will be much faster because it's a direct voice conversation you will be starting with us. We'll hear you practice directly and give direct help to improve.
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We're going to be critiquing on your second clip of this song, we won't even bother with the first: that's how bad it is.
For starters, we tell many people not to sing acapella and that goes for you as well. The reason why we tell you to sing with the artist and not instrumental or acapella is because singing with the artist keeps you under-control. You can hear the artist in the background and hence you can try to match their pitch, power and etc.
To make your natural voice sound better, forcefully make your voice a little deeper; when singing. For the time being, this will hide your nasal voice a little and in-time your natural while singing will slowly get rid of the nasal-sound behind it.
From what we can hear and feel, it seems that you aren't singing naturally. It sounds as if you are scared and frantic. You just need to close your eyes, feel the music and just sing calmly. It seems that you're trying to improve or rushing to sing. To improve you cannot rush, it takes alot of time and effort. You need to step back and just sing slowly and calmly. Sing for yourself.
The above is what you should be attempting to improve on. Nothing else.
You also need to work on your flow, control, pitch, power, resonance and etc (pretty much everything). You need to practice alot more than what you are doing. This does not mean just sing and sing for hours, it actually means sing while spotting your errors; fixing one thing after another.
Alot of people find it hard to spot their own errors and correct their own mistakes, that is why you have asked for our help directly. To improve at a much faster rate, add us on msn: floppy.pocky.16.08.07@hotmail.com. Over msn it will be much faster because it's a direct voice conversation you will be starting with us. We'll hear you practice directly and give direct help to improve.
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A singer is a singer, male or female, young or old, you are all the same. Face the facts and stop living in dream world: this is reality. We critique based on the standard you are at, at a professional level. If you think we don't know what we're talking about, that's your problem. We're ready for a challenge anytime, just send a message to our user, on our user, for the whole soompi to view. If one would like help continuously, add us on msn.
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Posted 01 April 2008 - 05:25 PM
LipsLikePearl Thank you for you comment. 
And I'm going to work on that.
Floppy.Pocky I agree with everything you say because I have heard it countless of times from my siblings and ppl on here. I really don't know what my problem.... But I am very thankful for your help. And I'm adding you on msn ASAP.
And I'm going to work on that. Floppy.Pocky I agree with everything you say because I have heard it countless of times from my siblings and ppl on here. I really don't know what my problem.... But I am very thankful for your help. And I'm adding you on msn ASAP.
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