[tony_arc]

hee... i did this a while ago... and i was bored so here it is!
MY VERSION of HANDS BY KODA KUMI...

Sorri.. but it only works on Lo-Fi for some reason...
HANDS- ENGLISH VERSION

constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome :-D

[Brian]

haha, hi-fi sounds funny. that happened to my song too.

some parts sound really nice. some just need more work. try putting more emotion into it. i love the lyrics. =)

[k_c_pop_bi7_b04]

i've never heard this song before .. but i like ur english version .. except. as said be4 u need more emotion -- this suppose to be female song . - find another duet or other miss soompi to sing ur version for you .. a great piece .. could u post the lyrics? . haha startin to like it

[Cutie*Songstress]

I LOVE the lyrics. Beautiful

[Vaerie]

You have a nice voice...but the way you're singingjust sounds...flat and nasally. Might I suggest trying to fix those before putting more emotion into it like the others said? Though I couldn't do much better...

[tony_arc]

hee... yea... my nose was stuffed that day lol~... hee.. aniwAIS... some of u wanted the lyrics...

"Hands (english version)"
(Koda Kumi)

*
Why do things shatter when they come to MY HANDS?
All memories and all the hopes and dreams,
Which seem to bring the happiness to my life.
They always seem to fade away...

Verse 1:
The tears are dripping slowly,
Along the ties that are between our love.
I slowly see pain rising,
As your mask continues smiling.
The things you've done to keep me from
crumbling to the ground,
Has slowly drifted onto you...

As tears continue to flow like the river,
I try so hard but always starts to breakdown.
And so I try to peel my heart from you...
So you would not feel more pain.
REPEAT *

Verse 2
I do not comprehend this.
Why do you still save me from every fall?
When it would prove much better
To just let go of me.
But you've continued to hold onto me so desparately...
Even if it was drawing ur own strengths.

I see the pain within both of your eyes.
It slowly builds within your fighting soul.
And yet still you continue to help me baby
I really don't understand...
REPEAT *

Bridge
The first time we have held hands...
Has brought so much happiness... (so much happiness)
Its time to heal the ailness
And set you free from this HOLD...

Time and time you fought to keep me going.
You held on saying "Don't Let Me Go",
But I can see that you're hurting slowly.
Why do you let this be so?
When you first reached and held onto MY HANDS,
You smiled softly saying "It'll all be OK".
But you really began to hurt slowly.
Why do you continue this way?

...Now I'll set you free from MY HANDS.

hee.. i'll try to make a better version.. haha~ XP

P.S. if any grl here wanna sing it... hee... feel free to ... just credit for the lyrics haha... and i have instrumental if anione needs it.. hee.. kk :-D

[the kite]

oo i lke it ^^
youve got an awesome voice. uh huh and lovely lyrics <3

i`d love to sing this <33 but i dunno how to record =O
so nvms hahahah

[Celestial Child]

I wouldn't mind trying to sing this. Seriously, I'll try and hopefully I won't kill it.

...i'll need the instrumental. :x

This post has been edited by Celestial Child: 09 December 2005 - 07:07 PM

[tony_arc]

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2CCTU1N...UB35NCRUW3XVH75

there's the instrumental for Koda Kumi- Hands... if anione wants it... Uploaded
12/10/05 12:15 AM EST

:-D ima gonna sing this ova again~.. hee.. i wanna add more emotion! >: )

[the kite]

^ teehee thanks <3

[MzBeciko]

oo i like