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Please, Do Check Out My Dancing!

#1 spiralapplejuice

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Posted 03 May 2008 - 02:49 AM

Please, do check out my dancing. Here are the links:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0OmvXQQAsYc
http://tazzytashi.multiply.com/video/item/...nship_Game_2008

They're the same video. I posted 2 links just in case one of the other doesn't work. If both don't work, PM me.

Please tell me everything you think, good or bad, I'll take 'em to improve more.

Thanks in advanced!

#2 tjh246

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Posted 06 May 2008 - 04:55 AM

not bad, good energy but the dance was a little messy

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#3 EverCool

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Posted 06 May 2008 - 10:57 AM

If you keep working at it you can have a career in dancing. Because it was messy but there was still something about it that was good.

#4 uh0hitzmissr0se

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Posted 06 May 2008 - 12:18 PM

it was nice..but what others have said before..messy..so yeah..& the camera girl..ugh..move the camera too much...but otherwise..thumbs up

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#5 skye.

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Posted 06 May 2008 - 04:22 PM

It was very messy. It looked like the rest of the people didn't really know the dance that well ?
I think you're awesome. Just get the synchronization down, and yeah. You're pretty awesome !
I think the mixing of the songs is kind of ... weird. Each song plays so short, and some of the transactions are smooth.
You did a good job overall though. (= Keep it up !