Im Bleeding....... Love.... =]

Im Bleeding....... Love.... =] Acoustic Version

#1 EddyK

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Posted 23 May 2008 - 03:10 PM

Hey guys, i decided to sing one morning. lol
This song is called Bleeding Love by Leona Lewis(She is fkadjfklas hott!!!)
anyways
this is the link to the song
Soundclick =]

Im still trying to improve so helpful tips will be nice =]

also please check out my myspace, which is on my signature and ADDD!!! =]
i love seeing friend requests =]

Enjoy =]

#2 aliks089

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Posted 23 May 2008 - 03:20 PM

QUOTE (EddyK @ May 23 2008, 05:10 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

hey overall i thought this was a nice idea
cause this could work well in style that youre doing it
but were both guys here so im not going to fluff this up

i think you should sing the song a key or two higher
or sing it in the octave that jesse mccartney sings it because i think youre on hte same key hes on.. which is 5 half steps lower than leonas if im not wrong
i think youre trying use vibrato but its being forced out
whcih doesnt naturally occur while singing softly like that
the part before the bridge where you say crazy is off key
the guitar bits are a tad too hard to hear
i suggest you record them separately
they are a lot of off beat notes for both the guitar and vocals
i know you were trying to improv a bit but it was really inconsistent and it started sound clashed up

but yeah i do things like these all the time
im not an exceptional singer by any means and im working on bettering myself too

but i like your work and i hope you do post more

- aliks

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#3 Genesis

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Posted 23 May 2008 - 03:25 PM

Not bad at all! I like the idea of Acoustic~
It is a bit offkey... work on not going to all over the place. i have similar problems too.
i find you're a bit breathy~ Huu~ Im like that...
But you have a good voice, i can hear it.
So good and well done! Please record more soon~

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