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#1 User is offline   oha123 

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Posted 14 December 2005 - 09:47 AM

Hi ppl. I mixed this colloboration and Ill like people to listen to it. Comments are appreciated... thanks ^^;

Its sang by 3 non-korean girls. So yeah, pls forgive em if dey sc*ewd up the language.

Singer 1
Singer 2
Singer 3

naega ggoomgwuh watdun mae eelee uhneusae yuhgee geudae jabeun soneuro neukkyuhjyuh
uhjjuhmyun nuhmoo muljee molra malhajee mothaetjyo soomgyuh watdun geu maeumdo moreun chaero

geudaen uhddun maeum eengayo geu noon sogeh beechyuhon unjenga eui meerae majudo
modooga da nae guteengayo nan sala itna bwayo gamsahayo modeun guh gajyusseunee


Someday I'll lay my love on you. Baby I don't wanna lose it now
Just one, nuboon eengur
unjenga ooree man nan narchurum
naega saraganeun han eeyoo
ojeek nuhreul weehan mambooneen nal
arjanhah

jeenan naree naege marhaeyo unjekkajee youngwunhar soo itneun sarangeenjee
haroo eui kkeutehsun unjena nal geedaryuhjwuyo haengboghaeyo eerun nul sarang harsoorog

youngwunhar soo itneun gulyo sesang uhneu goteh suhrado
Just one, nuhboon eengur
nae salm eui ganbunbooneel geu sarang
baro geudae bakkeh ubdago
naneun argo issuh meedgo issuh
youngwunhee

urmana manheun saram sogehsuh nar chajutnayo jeegeum geudae eui gyuteuro gayo

I pray for this love to be true sesang uhneu gotehsurado miss you, my baby you
jogeum duh naegeh muhmoolrajwuyo
ee shigandeuleul numuhsuh guhjeetmarjuhrum
dalrajeeneun mae eelro..[/color]

Someday I'll lay my love on you. Baby I don't wanna lose it now
Just one, nuhboon eengur
unjenga ooree man nan narchuhrum
naega saraganeun han eeyoo ojeek nuhreul weehan mambooneen nar
arjanah

Lyrics from aheeyah.com ( i think )

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Stewpid me..i forgot the link

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avatar credits to theedqueen ^^;
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Posted 14 December 2005 - 10:57 AM

i'll go listen to it now. =)

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awww...... it's so nice!!! i wish i could sing like you guys! i'm so jealous! terrific job!
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Posted 14 December 2005 - 11:44 AM

not bad for a non-krn! i love this song..but nice job although the voices were a bit low!..did you record with a instrumental?
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Posted 14 December 2005 - 11:58 AM

I would like to start out that this was not really the best song choice since this song has notes low even for guys.

All three need to watch out for those pitch problems. Eveyone pretty much can't hit the pitch right away but gets it after.

Singer 1 has a REAL bad mic. And it sounds like when it was cleaned up, the quality got worse.

It would've been nice if Singer 2 used vibratto. ^^

Singer 3 should watch out those notes that she shouldn't die out in the end.

Alittle more time on the lyrics would've made a good difference.

Mixing sounds nice. ^^

Thanks for sharing!
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Posted 14 December 2005 - 12:44 PM

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Posted 15 December 2005 - 07:08 AM

hey! it's a very good try! u guys sounded very cheerful indeed!
hahaha, nice collobaration..
it's a good try for non professional singers!well.. just keep practising yah!
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Posted 16 December 2005 - 07:40 AM

COOL!!!...listening now...
hmmmm...not bad...3 of them rite?
non korean? really sound alike huh?
keep it up whoever you guys..
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Posted 16 December 2005 - 10:24 AM

'Someday~'

It was really cute. I like it. *waves flame* The beginning and the second verse stick out to me. Oompth was present. Your voices are nice. I hope to hear more solo songs out there to get to know you better. ^^;

Good job. :D
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Posted 16 December 2005 - 01:58 PM

this a good try! but it lacks emotion, and the low note seems struggling, and off-pitchiness, and in a few parts it seems as if the melody isn't that well-learnt. but it gets better as it goes on!! keep practicing guys (: <3

that last part and last vibratto was absolutely beautiful though : )

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Posted 17 December 2005 - 07:42 AM

i thought you guys did a great job ^^ i like it
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