[fallingfire]

Yay, we finally finished the Oppa Nappa collab. And we sounded awesome!
Listen to us!

Mixer: Nozomii
Jessica: Nozomii
Seohyun: fallingfire
Tiffany: jk2590xd

Yosh, I know Seohyun part (me) was a bit quiet. Other than that, everything was great! Jess and Tiff were amazing.

No silent listeners! Please do comment if you listen!
Thanks Nozomii for putting it together! You're awesome!

[j i w o n.]

hm. this was an interesting matching of voices.
honestly, don't hate me for saying this but i heard an overuse of vibratos
like at some parts, it sounded really nice & pretty but at others it sounded unnecessary

and overall, feeling-wise, it kind of sounded as if you guys were tired or something :/
great voices but just little things made the song sound not as great as it could be.
i heard a bit of instability issues from two of the singers

good job though! (:

[Namine]

please critique me harshly everyone who is gonna critique O_O
PLEASE O_O don't sugar coat ANYTHING!!!! Or i'll eat a baby
what? who said that

Ok, edit.
This is my soompi judging critiquing way.

Jessica
Good first verse. I enjoyed listening to this. It was strong, and good voice.
The vibrato was alright. Tender. A bit much.
The high part of the song, "han beon man nal mideo bwayo" seemed a bit strained/shouted.

Seohyun
Hm, you have potential to reach the high notes, but I think maybe you need to get up to the high notes a bit smoother.
Second verse, seemed a bit low. That verse is a bit low isn't it? (The beginning part) You could perhaps work on singing everything more fluidly.

Tiffany
Your voice was nice, though the vibrato was a bit too much.
Almost like classical/opera singer.
Just.. too much vibrato o_o Tone it down a little ^^;

[Nozomiii]

please critique me harshly everyone who is gonna critique O_O
PLEASE O_O don't sugar coat ANYTHING!!!! Or i'll eat a baby
what? who said that

[fallingfire]

yah, same here. don't go easy on me. ^.^

[Simon Cowell]

DISCLAIMER:
I am a blunt, harsh, critic and I do say everything that is on my mind.
but I DO NOT
let me repeat
DO NOT bash people.
All the critiques I give have NO hateful intentions WHATSOEVER
I don't even know you, how can I hate you?
If you have a problem with one of my critiques, please feel free to PM me and your complaints.
Thank you

-Simon

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Da aneunde nan aninde <-- that was a great ending vibrato
Geuraedo nohchigi shilheunde
Ddak hanbeonman nae maeul deuleoyo <-- a little sharp
Oppa apeseon yeojaranmaliya


Narang baphanbeon meokneunge
Geureohge himdeungayo
Ijeossdamyeonseo hanjaramyeonseo <-- you hooked those too much
Geu eonnin wae mannanay

Ajik naeun andeonayo
Manhi bujokhangayo
Hanbeonman nal mideobwayo
Naega jal hal su issneunde

Wae jagguman ugimanhaeyo <-- whoa there. It sounded like you were spitting out watermelon seeds
Naega geureohge aeji gatnayo
Ddak hanbeonman
Nae jinshiim deuleoyo <-- too sudden
Oppa apeseon yeojaranmaliya

Narang baphanbeon meokneunge
Geureohge himdeungayo
Ijeossdamyeonsea hanjaramyeonseo
Geu eonnin wae mannanayo

Ajik naeun andeonayo
Manhi bujokhangayo <-- unnecessary vibratos
Hanbeonman nal mideobwayo
Naega jal hal su issneunde

Harue ~ manbeon <--- STOP FORCING VIBRATOS
Saenggaki ~ nayo <-- good
Nunmulinado na ireohge chama <---- YOU TOO HOPE

Geudae saranghamyeon andae iyurado issnayo <--sounded really weird
Ijeossdamyeonso hanjaramyeonseo

Geu eonnin wae mannanayo <-- good

Oppa jeongmal nabbeunsaram
Jeongmal nae mameul moira~ <-- good
Nal mideobwayo
Nado jal hal su issneunde <-- good



Oh dear.

nozomiii -
Hope. I know you can do better. I've heard you do better. Not that you did absolutely horrid this time, but I feel like you didn't try as hard? Don't overdo vibratos. We've had this conversation before, and i know it's a habit. but stop.

jk2590xd - good, but you sounded very bored and "whatever, i suppose I'm singing". Have more power in your voice.

fallingfire - You sounded very out of place. I felt like you shouldn't be in this collab. Your singing was very weird to me, and your forced vibratos were pretty horrible. Try not to make things so fancy and just focus on having a strong solid sound.

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Thank you for bearing with my comments.
Keep practicing

Best wishes.

[jk2590xd]

thanks for the critiquess everyonee especially simon cowell
yeaa i tend to not have too much energyy in my voice.... i alwayss struggle with thattt =(

[nkp0504]

fallingfire at the beginning was sluring
i couldnt understand what you were singing.
but it got better. and yea u were a bit soft.

Nozomii i agree with above posters all ovibratos are
little too much for but i think you sounded amazing.

jk2590xd yea put some for emotion in to it. but u were good too
i think this was a cute collab.

[star55]

Good job everyone...
it would be nice if everyone had the same microphone... some people sounded far away... and really tired...

[yummiedesire]

fallingfire - cute voice, but needs to be a bit stronger. i bet you can sing a lot stronger than that. i agree with the other commenters, make sure your diction is somewhat sharp so it's understandable ^^

nozomii - aww hope you always have a great voice. some of your vibratos were good, but some unecessary and a little odd. your voice tends ot be a bit shaky, but you can always practice on that.

jk250xd - your voice is good of course. needs more emotion though.

decent collab girls =]
good job! keep practicing <3

[Nozomiii]

thank you everyone for comments + critiques!!!
Simon, I'm your fangirl btw~ <3

[fallingfire]

thanks everyone who commented. ^^
agreed, must word on pronunciation considering i'm not korean.

[misalovesya]

I thought the words were pretty easy to understand and they were well defined. But sometimes I was like "what is she saying?"
The vocals got very weak and shaky towards the end. I was a little disappointed about the end because the beginning was soo good! Good luck next time!

[iluvxiah94]

honestly
truthfully speaking
NOT BEING MEAN OR NETHING
everyone sounded good
but i think tiffany was the best
GOOD JOB TO ALL 4 OF YOU!