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Boa-jewel Song (cover) constructive criticism and comments, please!

#1 User is offline   fanfre 

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Posted 25 June 2008 - 12:49 AM

Here's my Boa-Jewel Song Cover. it's not as polished as it should be 'cause i only spent two days practicing the song. >.< the timing is off for some parts. and last night, i fell playing basketball, so i had to sit in a chair to record the whole time (standing up and moving around hurted). so some parts may be too loud. >.< but i know there's a lot of room for improvement.

advice would be greatly appreciated! and i'd also appreciate it if there weren't many silent listeners even though my singing is bad. ^^;

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Posted 25 June 2008 - 09:40 AM

It sounded okay to me.....but maybe you could sing closer to the mic? It sounded blurry, but you seem to be in the right tune smile.gif
And you can reach the high notes! *thumbs up* biggrin.gif

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Posted 25 June 2008 - 09:44 AM

You were a bit flat on the 4th "whoa"and stop vibrating every note, it sounds very bad if you do.
I know it's hard to get rid of a bad habit, but consciously try and try and try again.
And play around with your mic. Stand closer, farther away, angle it up, down, etc. to see when your voice quality is the best.
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Posted 25 June 2008 - 10:26 AM

thanks for the comments, ameydian and simon_cowell. haha, i think i need a new mic 'cause the quality hasn't been good lately. simon_cowell, about the vibration...i think it's become a habit. i do have to watch it. >.<

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Posted 25 June 2008 - 10:31 AM

Oooohhh, UK. Haha, anyways, it's kind of hard to hear you because of the quality, so it's kind of hard to critique. One of the things that I noticed though is that you have a tendency to hold out a lot of the notes during the verses, which kind of exaggerates them a bit too much for the song. You do have a nice voice for this song though.
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Posted 25 June 2008 - 10:39 AM

^ yup, that's why i need a new mic. thanks!

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Posted 25 June 2008 - 02:54 PM

wello smile.gif
the quality of the recording is quite quiet....so i cant hear you singing properly..stand closer to the mic next time?

with the bits i did hear...i think you voice is pretty smile.gif work on your support and emotion and i think you will be really really good ^^

hwaiting!

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Posted 25 June 2008 - 03:27 PM

fanfre ~
I can't hear you.
A new mic should do??
I don't know much about
BoA's songs. But I think
your Korean is very good biggrin.gif




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Posted 25 June 2008 - 03:47 PM

thanks, bands 182. and thanks, jenny! yup, new mic, i've been wanting to get one for a while now. guess i'll have to bear with recording poorly until i get a new mic? haha

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