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*# Ajoo's 1st Kiss #* Im on a dilemma T_T Pls help me !

#1 User is offline   Xiah Myungjin 

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Posted 08 July 2008 - 01:57 AM

This is my best korean song attempt yet ! * sorry if i misprounounciate any words XD *
Maybe, I'm gonna also post it for the round 2 clip possibly ..
But Im still in a dilemma, whether im gonna post this or something else .. Pls give me some feedbacks about this ^__^ .. ( like is it better than my round 1 clip ? )

Harsh criticisms is welcome too ! ^^ ..


CLICKIE HERE.

addition :
My first round 1 clip is a disaster.. I hv to post something better ! ..
Previous Round 1 Clip : CLICKIE HERE T.T


comments are HUGEly appriciated <33



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#2 User is offline   fallenangel_486 

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Posted 08 July 2008 - 02:20 AM

hey~!
I LOOOOOVVVVEEEEEEEE IT~!!!!
hohohohoh~! xD
it kinda reminds me of donghae's voice..? xD
but there's something in the high part.. kinda off a bit i guess?
but it's really good! (:
nice job! ^^

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#3 User is offline   Tae Gyung Jin Hwa 

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Posted 08 July 2008 - 06:10 AM

practice pronunciation......
some parts are crispy?....... u get what i mean...... like ur not sure if its really the right tone....
timing......
shakey,.,,,
that high tone is hard dont worry about it, istruggled on that too.....
PRACTICE MORE EDWIN^^
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Posted 08 July 2008 - 03:32 PM

edwin! how long have you been practicing?

it was nicely done! you started off nicely and ended nicely.

*fangirls*

good job! and good luck in round 2! =]

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#5 User is offline   Lynni3z 

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Posted 08 July 2008 - 04:47 PM

nice work edwin ^^
just keep practicing and you'll do great!
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i think you did a great job in this one compared to the one you sent me earlier XD
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Posted 09 July 2008 - 10:59 AM

woah..sha nice!!
hahahahah you posted it finally =O
practice more and you'll be a blast!! hohoho
wanna hear more from you! <33


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Posted 09 July 2008 - 11:07 AM


yay another male singer:]

I think you did good:]!
Keep on practicing and you'll be great^_____^



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Posted 09 July 2008 - 03:51 PM

I like your tone in this song =) Just work on pitch and stuff ~ practice!

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Posted 09 July 2008 - 09:07 PM

hey hey xiah myungjin.
u did good i nthis song, there were a few pitch problems and phrasing, but still ur voice sounded great! make sure u come out with new stuff, some solo stuff lol.
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Posted 09 July 2008 - 09:16 PM

i love how smooth your voice is <333
you pulled off this song real nice XD
especially the low parts -- sounded very sekushii ^^

good job :]
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#11 User is offline   Xiah Myungjin 

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Posted 11 July 2008 - 12:30 AM

Fallen : DONGHAEE ?? U are praising me LOL XDD.. His voice sounds like JaeJoong.. Doesnt resembles mine even a bitt LOL XDDD
Yeah, the bridge sucks .. Its very2 high .. So I just managed to make it smoother .. =[ I hope its not making your ears bleed .. XD

Jinhwa : * bow to sensei * .. I was thinking whether I beat ur rendition or not * LOL kidding * XD .. Yeah, I tried to imitate Ajoo's voice and ended up being crispy .. Yeah, I need my voice control bit more T_T .. Practise. Practise !! Jiayoo !!

Shannon : HIYAA !! Thanks a lot for the comment ! U're cool xD .. Haha I've been practising this song everyday, Completely fallen to this song and decided to give it a try xD .. At least its better than the first one right, noona ?? XDD

Lynnie : Oh. the bridge changed haha XDD .. A bit smoother I guess .. Eventually, I'll let this become my round 2 clip .. I hope it works well ! Wish me luck, umma !

Tsuki : Haha .. YOU are the BLAST ! .. I am nothing compared to you XDD .. LOL .. Thx for the comment =] .. I am looking forward for our next collab k ! ^^

Dollie : LOL .. Yeah I am a male singer XD .. Wanna flirt with me ? LOL XDD .. * super kidding * .. Arigatou ! Your comments meant so much !

Romantist : Woww a Soompi idol judge likes my song ! I'm so proud ROFL XD .. Hehe. Yeah .. I like my lower parts too .. Even though its not my comfort range .. But im trying my best ! Thx !

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