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#1 User is offline   [[ace`]] 

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Posted 11 July 2008 - 10:14 AM

HELLO!
It's me again!

happy.gif This is a collab done by me and my 3 other friends.
Singing Irony from Wonder Girls.

First one to sing is Me.
Second one to sing is Eve.
Third one to sing is Melt.
Fourth one to sing is Xingyi.

I did the rap too~

Have fun listening!

And also after listening please comment about what you think of the song


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Posted 11 July 2008 - 10:42 AM

You're the first one to sing, right?
I really like the way you put emotion to your part of the song & nice rap. Nicely done!
I also recommend a better microphone because I can hear a lot of puffing sounds.
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 10:50 AM

Ooh, you sound nice. I can tell you have a strong voice. And your background is real good--your rap too!
For some reason, the chorus was a little boring to me..? I don't know why. dry.gif
You have a good voice, I think you get a new mic though. unsure.gif

AWESOME JOB you guys did!

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Posted 11 July 2008 - 10:54 AM

its actually one of the best collabs
ive heard. biggrin.gif i like your voice.!
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 11:10 AM

It's actually really good... wait, no it's really GREAT but yeah I agree the mic kinda ruined it but your voices sound HOT lol
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 11:51 AM

It was really good. ^^
You're first one to sing, right? Your voice sounded strong. : D
Good singing and the rap was really good too!!
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 12:10 PM

That was a pretty good collab, better than what I could've done...lol.
All of the voices worked so well together.
Thanks for sharing!! (:
Keep up the good work.
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 03:45 PM

I like the way you deliver your verse. You put a lot of feeling into the way you sing and it comes off great.
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 03:47 PM

that was good yea the chorus was a bit boring because there wanst any like power.
but yea deff good i really like your voice its very strong
yay!
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 05:21 PM

Hey not bad!

but the chorus was alright. it was kinda boring cuz it sounds monotone...

but good job ^^
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 05:48 PM

QUOTE (strg @ Jul 12 2008, 02:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You're the first one to sing, right?
I really like the way you put emotion to your part of the song & nice rap. Nicely done!
I also recommend a better microphone because I can hear a lot of puffing sounds.
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Yepp Yepp I am the first one to sing alright~
Ahh. Thankyou for the compliment!
I'll go get a better microphone soon~


QUOTE (shinhwa_n_choua @ Jul 12 2008, 02:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ooh, you sound nice. I can tell you have a strong voice. And your background is real good--your rap too!
For some reason, the chorus was a little boring to me..? I don't know why. dry.gif
You have a good voice, I think you get a new mic though. unsure.gif
AWESOME JOB you guys did!


HAHA! YAY! Thankyou or liking my RAP! We will get new mics happy.gif
Yeahh.. the chorus was a little boring coz some of them sang it vry subtly, if I were to sing it with force then I'll cover their voices up.

QUOTE (harmonyfaith @ Jul 12 2008, 02:54 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
its actually one of the best collabs
ive heard. biggrin.gif i like your voice.!


Thankyou! I'll do more collabs with my people and share more!

QUOTE (himeko_princess @ Jul 12 2008, 03:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's actually really good... wait, no it's really GREAT but yeah I agree the mic kinda ruined it but your voices sound HOT lol


Thankyou for listening! Waww... First time someone said that my voice is hot. happy.gif

QUOTE (*bluebutterfly* @ Jul 12 2008, 03:51 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It was really good. ^^
You're first one to sing, right? Your voice sounded strong. : D
Good singing and the rap was really good too!!


Yehh! I am the first one to sing.
Ahahaha. Thankyou for the compliment~

QUOTE (*||Ashley|| @ Jul 12 2008, 04:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That was a pretty good collab, better than what I could've done...lol.
All of the voices worked so well together.
Thanks for sharing!! (:
Keep up the good work.


We will keep sharing more works! Thankyou for listening!

QUOTE (xkiseki @ Jul 12 2008, 07:45 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like the way you deliver your verse. You put a lot of feeling into the way you sing and it comes off great.


eyyy~ Thanks a bunch for the comment~ I will put more feelings into the songs i sing subsequently~
Thankyou for listening!

QUOTE (nkp0504 @ Jul 12 2008, 07:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
that was good yea the chorus was a bit boring because there wanst any like power.
but yea deff good i really like your voice its very strong
yay!


thankyou for liking my voice! this way i'll have more confidence when i record later songs.
yeahhh. the chorus i agree. XD my friends were singing sofly, so i was afraid if i sang a little louder I will cover their voices.

QUOTE (joong33 @ Jul 12 2008, 09:21 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hey not bad!

but the chorus was alright. it was kinda boring cuz it sounds monotone...

but good job ^^


YEPP! We will add more feelings into the choruses we sing next time!
I'll remind my friends to sing a bit louder. I'll sing louder too!
Thankyou for taking time to listen!

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Posted 11 July 2008 - 09:50 PM

This was a really good collab~ I liked everyone's voices ^^ The chorus could have had more energy true, but your voices blended nicely. My only real critique would be to mix a little better, The volume levels were too soft in some parts, and too overpowering in others. The chorus was really loud, that's why it gave the max out sound, I think that might be an issue with your vocals too? Your mic might not be too bad, but the volume might be going over? Or you might have a really strong voice where you need to hold the mic a bit further. The rap was really nice too~! Maybe put in a little more attitude, but otherwise it was really nice. I also enjoyed the adlibs that you included. I haven't listened to Irony collabs in awhile, but if I remember not everyone always did them.... Or if they did, they weren't that strong XD But yours was good~ Was this your guys first collab? If so, nice start~!

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Posted 11 July 2008 - 10:48 PM

best collab if heard so far (y)
i like your vioce the best biggrin.gif nice and strong great for this song
the chorus sounded a bit boring lol compared to your solo part
and the rap was great too but i agree with above add more attitude make it sound better and make sure you know when to catch a breath properly
well done! although id never be able to do as well as you!
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Posted 12 July 2008 - 01:06 AM

You guys did a great job!! I love the solo parts because it sounds so strong, but the chorus does need improvement>>> i think it's still great though...

Are you guys Korean? This would be sooo impressive if you weren't, but sounded FLUENT!!
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Posted 12 July 2008 - 03:30 AM

QUOTE (Odango @ Jul 12 2008, 01:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This was a really good collab~ I liked everyone's voices ^^ The chorus could have had more energy true, but your voices blended nicely. My only real critique would be to mix a little better, The volume levels were too soft in some parts, and too overpowering in others. The chorus was really loud, that's why it gave the max out sound, I think that might be an issue with your vocals too? Your mic might not be too bad, but the volume might be going over? Or you might have a really strong voice where you need to hold the mic a bit further. The rap was really nice too~! Maybe put in a little more attitude, but otherwise it was really nice. I also enjoyed the adlibs that you included. I haven't listened to Irony collabs in awhile, but if I remember not everyone always did them.... Or if they did, they weren't that strong XD But yours was good~ Was this your guys first collab? If so, nice start~!


Ahh thankyou for liking all our voices!
We will mix it better next time. happy.gif
Eh chorus was loud?
ohhh.
I'll remember to put more attitude into the rap next time!
This is our latest collab, not the first one though. happy.gif
Thankyou for listening!


QUOTE (DOLLYbeans @ Jul 12 2008, 02:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
best collab if heard so far (y)
i like your vioce the best biggrin.gif nice and strong great for this song
the chorus sounded a bit boring lol compared to your solo part
and the rap was great too but i agree with above add more attitude make it sound better and make sure you know when to catch a breath properly
well done! although id never be able to do as well as you!


Komawoso! Thanks for liking my voice. I'll sing more and share.
Ohh... Coz my friends have slightly softer voices, so we had to sound softer in order for our voices to blend well.
I will add more attitude into my rap and figure out how to do that~
YEAHHH. i sounded breathless right O_O XD
You can do it too!


QUOTE (Ca_Kristine_4ever @ Jul 12 2008, 05:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You guys did a great job!! I love the solo parts because it sounds so strong, but the chorus does need improvement>>> i think it's still great though...

Are you guys Korean? This would be sooo impressive if you weren't, but sounded FLUENT!!


We will improve on our choruses on our next collab!
Nope we are not korean. We are Chinese but we're living in singapore

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Posted 12 July 2008 - 11:14 AM

LOL.
there are really a lot of comments. O.O
thanks for all those who commented!
we'll work harder to imrove our chorus! ((:

P.S: ACE HAS A REALLY HOT VOICE RIGHT! <33

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Posted 12 July 2008 - 06:09 PM

it was a pretty good collab, just the chorus part needs more work like they others said.
maybe positioning the mic would help a bit so that the voices would blend on the same level.
other than that, well done smile.gif
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Posted 12 July 2008 - 06:30 PM

QUOTE (melt_ @ Jul 13 2008, 03:14 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
LOL.
there are really a lot of comments. O.O
thanks for all those who commented!
we'll work harder to imrove our chorus! ((:

P.S: ACE HAS A REALLY HOT VOICE RIGHT! <33


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Posted 12 July 2008 - 07:09 PM

This is probably one of the best collabs I've heard(:
The pronouncation is really good too!
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Posted 12 July 2008 - 10:01 PM

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Thankyou for taking time to listen to our collab!
We will improve more on our singing techniques and pronunciations so that we can share better songs!
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