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[[ Daybreak's Bell ★ L' A R C - E N - C I E L - Pleeeasse Critique! ]] I tried singing rock.. is it not for me? :( __________★

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Post icon  Posted 18 July 2008 - 07:38 PM

Hi

L'arc-en-ciel is my ALL TIME favorite band.. of ALL TIME O_O
and I would LOVE to be able to sing the glorious genre of j-rock .. but I never thought i had the voice for it ._.
so... could you tell me? smile.gif

I already showed this to my friend, and he said "it sounds.. weird...."
And my best friend in the world says
"it sounds funny"
So, don't worry about hurting my feelings!!
Please be harsh and blunt! PLEASE!!!!!

And please also give constructive criticism so that i can improve! smile.gif


I didn't sing the whole song.
No point in learning the whole thing if i sound bad singing it right??? ^^
Also, I probably got some words wrong XD; but oh well :3

BTW
YOU SHOULD LOWER THE VOLUME AT THE CHORUS O_O
I shoulda used my compressor ._.
Mic dies at high parts ._.


http://www.zshare.net/audio/1556946208fcfe0e/


MUCHO THANKS TO RUFUS. FOR THE INSTRUMENTAL biggrin.gif

So.. Rock, is it for me? Or should I never touch it again? >_<


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Posted 18 July 2008 - 09:08 PM

OREO WIFE, I SEEE YOUUUUUU O_O
you better not sugar coat anything sleep.gif

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Posted 18 July 2008 - 09:12 PM

WOOOOW..
I think rock is a good choice for you actually.

Since this is sung by a guy, it makes it that much difficult for you.
I realized some of the low notes, you like.. barely touched it because it was too deep for you. (around 38-40 secs/1:38 ish)?

But when you were singing in mid range for this song, I love it.
It suits your voice so well, and the little touches you add to the end of each line puts a little more 'oomph' in the song. (24 sec)
As for the high notes, some of them, you were perfect (2:08-09) and some sounded forced (1:56).
Work on that a little more.

But overall, I love this.
and.. I love youuuuuuuuuuu.

edit: no... i dont sugarcoat anything for strangers. =]

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Posted 18 July 2008 - 09:14 PM

ROCK'S A GOOD CHOICE?!?!?!
you have no idea how happy that makes me TT________TT
I can finally live my dream of being a rock star TT_____TT
hee hee hee not rly XD

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Posted 18 July 2008 - 09:28 PM

I would pitch up the song a key. I think you'll be more comfortable singing higher coz the low parts lacked power. I think you need a little more oomph throughout the song, sing stronger? Watch the wavering in your voice. Good pitch, nice tone to your voice. I liked it! I like that you like ROCK! ROCK ON!

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Posted 19 July 2008 - 09:22 AM

^ thank you!! biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif
Yea I tried to sound all rock-y and Nakashima/HYDE - y XD;;
Maybe that's why my voice sounded wavered?
dunno why i use more vibratos with a rock song ._.

I'll record and up the pitch.
I had to up the pitch for this version too XD;;

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Posted 19 July 2008 - 09:40 AM

EYY!
I like your voice!~ It's really clean sounding.
happy.gif But it seems like it's a little bit too low for you eh!

AHH your voice is nice!
Sing more rock!
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Posted 21 July 2008 - 08:40 PM

^ o_o;; should i sing more rock?? I would LOOOOOOOVE TO TT_____________TT
Hope I can pull off other rock songs X_X

I sincerely thank you all for your comments TT____TT
means a lot

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Posted 23 July 2008 - 11:01 PM

hmmm not bad not bad
like everyone said midrange and actually i think the lower were better
than the higher gotta work on those
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Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:10 AM

^ thank you ^^ but does my voice fit it well? Or does it sound out of place?

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