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#1 User is offline   r0mantisteg0ist 

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Posted 28 July 2008 - 09:46 PM

ok. so its 12:45 am right now.
i started at about 12:10 XDD
while talking with joseph ong o__O
yess, one of my many <insert adjective here> oneshots
but i think this one actually turned out good
except for the last chorus >__<

dedicated to izzy
who's always trying to record this song
i'm not stealing your thunder! you just inspired me ;]

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please comment~ woot

pps. im not gonna be around for a few weeks. somebody keep the thread alive? XD;
i lied. i find a way to a computer D<< LOL
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Posted 28 July 2008 - 09:50 PM

I'm firstttttt biggrin.gif? SAVEEEEEEEE =]

edit: OMGGGG why are people in your school so freakin talented... its like a SUPASTAR HS...

anyways :]... i <3 this song to the max.

and your rendition is <33333 smile.gif ... your voice sounds sooo nice and clearr

V when we were listening to it together on skype... she was like, her voice is so nice :] like butter pecany.. i was like?... excuse me? lol
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Posted 28 July 2008 - 10:04 PM

^LOL of course! biggrin.gif

Man, you sing in better korean than I do ohmy.gif
Your voice is soooo freaking smooth and clear and butter pecan-y.. <3

Does Izzy sing too? Tell her to post! :]
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Posted 28 July 2008 - 10:59 PM

HI !
the first second i heard the clip, i was like "WOW!" biggrin.gif
I think your voice is really really beautiful! .. and "breathy" lol which suits the song really well
my advice is for you to sing the song with more emotion, and try to hit the higher notes right...besides that i think overall your clip is goooood! biggrin.gif
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 05:56 AM

ruyi~

You sounded very lovely even if it was only a one shot! I wanted to do this song before but I dunno what happened with it hahahahaha

Good job!
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 06:05 AM

talking to joseph?! o___O
that kid is like always on... x_x
anyways <3 i liked ayaka better,
but this suits you well too xDDD
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 06:24 AM

LOL how in the world are you so fast at posting up songs hahahahaha so pro hehe. this song was sung well i liked the japanese one more but this was good too.
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 09:53 AM

I've heard the original like... once so I don't really know if it's good or not...

Haha sorry but you have a really nice voice.
"I could while away hours,
Conferrin’ with the flowers, consultin’ with the rain
I would be just a nuffin’
My head all full of stuffin’, my heart all full of pain

I would dance and be merry
Life would be a ding-a-derry
If only I had a brain"
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 01:43 PM

;o younha cover! will listen during my lunch break at work. be back smile.gif

ooh, very cool. suits your voice pretty well imo...good work haha
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Posted 29 July 2008 - 04:56 PM

*saves*
xD be back to edit!!!
need to sleep first!!

xx

edit: ok done sleeping and waking up and going out to meet people and then coming back home xD

anyway
ohmygosh
i really wanna move over to where you guys are....you bunch of soompiers seem to be going to the same school and living near eachother x_x dang you guys!!!

Ru~~~~~~~ you sound so smooooth~
<3 and your vocals are just so you! lub lub lub it!!!
how come you have such good one shots T_T
when i replay mine, im like 0_0 "ahem....gosh do i sound that bad?!?!......OWWWWWieeee *covers own ears*"
hehehe

hwaiting!!!

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Posted 30 July 2008 - 07:46 AM

It4cH1: aha, you're wayyy to nice to me x3 thanks a bunch. but yeah. i must say. my school is pretty freaking cool ;]

noraesonagi: LOL butter pecan-y XDDDDD there's no way i sing korean better than you. yanno, i could barely make it through a chorus o__O kept stumbling on words. (thats why i sound so tired in the last chorus =.=) anyway. I <3 YEKKI! woot.

testingroup: hehe, yeah, you've pretty much hit the major points. i need to sing with emotion P: and my high notes were pretty horrendous. but THANKS for giving me constructive comments ^^ <3

SweetsLove: hehe, im sure your version would've pwnt mine P: anyway. thanks ^^

JZ: he IS always on -o- what a weirdo LOL jk. thanks for listening ^~ go audition for the mighty mouth collab : DD i think its RUJU time *boogies*

Fuma: LOL thanks XD well, bad habit of mine. i just chug out stuff regardless of quality >__<anyway. have you chosen a song yet?

fallingfire: you should DEFINITELY go hear the original. she is pwnage XD anyway, thanks for complimenting on my voice ;]

YYZ: XD <3 thanks. means a lot coming from you :] (btw, for our demo thing... uh... it sound funky LOL. not bad per say, just really funky... i'll show you later D:)

ALI: NOOO OOOOO i bet like a hundred bucks you dont sound that bad ;] you're just too harsh on yourself. aaaand its just like, the five of us who live near each other. plus, your dancing skill pwns mine by like a thousand, so i'd have to say that you pwn me. XD
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Posted 30 July 2008 - 03:53 PM

RU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FIVE PEOPLE LIVING NEAR EACHOTHER IS WAYYYY BETTER THAN BEING STUCK IN A REALLY WESTERNISED COUNTRY BY MY LONESOME!!!
i have no one i can freestyle with x__________________x"

i have no one to sing with x____________x"

weep for me a thousand tears xD

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ruyi, im serious, for some odd and random reason, ive now lost my voice.....and my throat has suddenly gone dry on me..........i was FINE yesterday, was getting better, my cough was disappearing....then BAM this happens?! and i cant even sing.."normally" now......orteke!!!!!!11

x_X do you see my dilema!!! xD <3
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Posted 01 August 2008 - 06:43 PM

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GET BETTER !!!

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but yeah. i dont freestyle with those 5. or sing with them o___O
i barely even see them LOL
so its not that different ;]
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Posted 03 August 2008 - 12:46 PM

so breathy, sounds like such a heavenly clip, heh..
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Posted 03 August 2008 - 09:32 PM

hello jello!
wow. your vibrato is so natural and controlled.
and i love the feel you gave this song. especially in the beginning.
maybe towards the middle, you should build up the song more...to a climax before the bridge instead of just keeping it the same volume.
but the bridge is really good. and then you seem to lose steam towards the end. hahaha
i'm writing this as i'm listening. yea. you get slightly off on some of the high notes towards the end, but understandable since it's a one-shot.
that was really good though! biggrin.gif
i look forward to more

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Posted 04 August 2008 - 06:19 AM

This was really good ! ,

I love Younha =) .

You gave it justice ,
I like your voice D: .

Haha , Hopefully my voice is good enough for the collab haha XD

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Posted 04 August 2008 - 02:26 PM

A little constructive criticism, hope you don't mind.
I like the tone of your voice, but you still need to work on your voice some more.
Kinda choppy, and off tune at some parts.
You hit the higher notes well.
Overall I thought you did a good job, keep it up !
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Posted 04 August 2008 - 04:16 PM

eww i never really liked youna.. but this is so DIFFERENT From her style!?

im loving this song... ><
YOU CRY?! i cry.. tears of jelousy.. sad.gif

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Posted 06 August 2008 - 01:34 PM

MilkTeaRunSugar*: omo, such flattery *blush* THANK YOU <3

baboxp: LOL omg totally right ^^; by the end i was so freaking tired, i think i basically squeaked it out >___<;; thanks so much for the comment, now i know what to improve on ;] and thanks for listening!

LAMAAAA: pshhh whatever. your voice is gonna totally overshadow me in our collab D: thanks for the nice comment ^^ anddd psst. when/how are you gonna give me your parts? o__O nvm checked my email. whoo ~

j-tan03: i don't mind. in fact, i really welcome it ^^ thanks for listening to it in a critical way. can i ask how my voice was choppy so i can fix it?

gene aka. singing mastah: aww. stop inflating my head D: its not good for my health ;] i should be crying cuz you pwn everyone so freaking much. haha, thanks a bunch for listening ^^


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Posted 06 August 2008 - 02:06 PM

I love it I love it happy.gif
I love younha and i love you.

I liked the feel of this song when you sang it. =]
great job!

constructive critisism: post more. -laugh-
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