[SailorBoy62]

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So, a couple of months back I posted up this song that I wrote last summer called "Move On" to a beat by Ansane Productions, and even though I liked the song, listening back to it, I was really dissatisfied with the mix and the overall arrangement, like, it felt like it was missing something. So, I just recently went back and changed it up, editing bits and pieces of the main vocal, not much though, and drastically changing the background vocals so that they'd be less heavy and less... annoying.

I also took out the mid-section of the song that featured a distorted, "Got got, baby I got got" repetition because I felt like it was kind of interrupting the overall flow of the song. I was originally going to put back in a bridge that I had written for it, but it ended up not meshing that well so instead of having anything come after the 2nd chorus, it just goes straight into the final repetition and to the outro. But yeah, I think it turned out a lot better.

[nhii]

".....do you know if you're in love with the right guy .. just because he makes you smile ....." - your voice sounded really good during those lines

[LK.]

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Hi Nhii !! .

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Nice song , The lyrics flowed nicely with the backing track , and the harmonies were good as well .

[SailorBoy62]

Thanks for the comments you guys! =) I really appreciate it.

[icepheer]

the lyrics is sooo brilliant!! it actually caught my attention, you're such a very talented guy. keep it up!

[SailorBoy62]

^Thank you very much, I really appreciate it.

[ny-sw / ny_sw.]

I didn't hear the original, but I really like this version.
The lyrics are very well written and your voice is sooo smooth and clear. :DDD
You have mad skills. :]

[jzsun]

like i said. poppin those originals out like babies ~ > >
absolutely adore ansane's beats !
too bad, i'm not talented enough to do anything with them .__.
just listen to the awesomeness over and over again D:

anyways, on topic.
WOW. seriously. WOW.
didn't hear the original (don't know how i missed it oO)
but DAYUM. this is definitely one of my favorites from you.
it's amazing *O* the lyrics are incredible.

can't get enough of you and your stuff ~ :]

[SailorBoy62]

noraesonagi - Thank you very much! I'm glad you like the song.

jzsun - Haha, I don't really churn them out that quickly, I just kind of record a bunch at once and then they sit on my hard drive until I have time to post them and then I go like months without actually recording/writing a new one. Hey hey, I'm sure you could do something amazing with an Ansane beat, I'm just sad that they haven't been doing their new free beat thing in awhile. Anyways, thanks for the comment. =)