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Newbie Entering Performers Section Rihanna - Take a Bow

#1 User is offline   hyunnitea 

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Posted 20 August 2008 - 01:58 PM

please cover your ears.

Hi all...I got an adapter to hook up my karaoke mic so I'm posting my first song:

You can hear me go flat throughout because I can't transition smoothly. I would like tips on that and how to improve vocal range, if you can critique me. also, i sound nasally at the end of each line almost...must work on that...

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I didn't even realize the file wouldn't stream. Thanks to chitah for letting me know!
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thanks for listening
Take a Bow


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#2 User is offline   chitah 

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Posted 21 August 2008 - 02:43 PM

u should post ur music somewhere where peopel can access it more easily, not everybody likes to have to download things first.
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Posted 22 August 2008 - 05:27 PM

I don't like downloads either. It's fixed now.


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Posted 23 August 2008 - 06:12 AM

your voice seems familiar......not sure where ive heard your voice before or maybe you sound like someone i know xD
quite good for your first singing clip smile.gif

it seems you have a bit of a pitch problem and lacking breath....you cut your notes short half way through singing a "sentence"

you can improve by practicing more and doing some scales and such??
i think the more you sing the more youll get used to the whole breathing thing...i used to be like that...
then youll gradually sound more.....powerful?? if thats the worst word....
or you could dance or run to improve your stamina?! xD haha sorry..dont take my word for it..i just heard it helps with breath support..but im not that great a singer..i just give advice hahah xD

your voice is nice so just keep practicing smile.gif

good luck and fighting!!
x Ali
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