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[collab] Look Only At Me - Response To Gd Calling RAPPERS, SINGERS, MIXERS

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Posted 21 August 2008 - 08:54 PM

I don't think I'll be continuing with this collab as no one is interested in it soooo yeah thank you to the one auditioner! haha





LOOKING FOR 3 RAPPERS, 2 SINGERS, 1 MIXER, 1 BACKUP MIXER!
Please comment on the lyrics and if there are any corrections that are needed smile.gif

Listen to GDragon's Part 2

After listening to soyunee’s version of Look At Me - which I consider as a part 3 wink.gif (Response to TaeYang), I wanted to make a response as well, but for GD’s version. (Soyun, don’t worry, I made sure to change the chorus wink.gif)

While I love rapping (or trying to at least), I have to admit I suck bad and didn’t want to post up a full, hammered, icky version up here (I can hit the beats and the pronunciation but it still sounds a bit strange D:)

SOOO I was hoping some Soompiers would try this version out. I didn’t match the syllables up, so certain areas will need to be slowed/sped up according to the area. Please do audition! This is really all for fun, so no deadline UNTIL all parts are filled.

If you want to try out please include:
CODE
[b]Name/Username:[/b]
[b]Color Auditioning:[/b]
[b]Audio Clip of the Section:[/b] (Please upload to a site where I can download the clip easily so I don’t have to nag you for the downloadable clip later on. If you say you’re going to audition, PUT UP YOUR CLIP SOON! ACAPPELLA please. No other audio than your voice in the file.)


Please post if you can mix wink.gif

Color Breakdown
Red: fortheSEUNGRI clip in
Green: Rap
Purple: Singing
Blue: Rap
Black: linuhhparkk (as long as you get that extra black section in) chorus in

Note
Honestly, I have not timed the section after the last red part. So, people auditioning for black and purple, tell me if there’s a complete timing/pronunciation difference. -edit- I just timed it last night, and while at the end certain parts need to be sped up, it isn't too hard.

Rappers: I do have a relative idea of how the raps are supposed to sound, but I have NOT timed it EXACTLY. However, if I have time I will post a relative, icky version so you can hear the rhythm (without timing).

What I’m looking for in the auditions

I’m just looking for right pitch, beat, pronunciation, mic/audio quality, and synchronization with the background music, so please listen to the original as you sing the parts so that the mixing won’t be a hassle! I’m not picky about anything else smile.gif

Lyrics: Korean, Romanized, Translated
Please do not distribute at all.

[k] Look Only At Me Pt. 4 – Response to GDragon’s Pt. 3
Can you guys see the purple alright?
I understand some of the grammar isn't correct since Korean isn't my first language, but some of it is on purpose for pronunciation reasons smile.gif


Ah ah ah ah I’m sorry babe
다다다 다 용서는 못해
ah ah ah ah I’m sorry babe
나만바라봐 part 4


남잔 다 똑같단 그 말 나 이젠 믿는 다 boy
여지껏 내가 만났던 그런 사람들과는 똑같은 boy
나 하나만 바라보겠단 말 네거짓말 boy
그리고 내게 준사랑앞에 배신은 했지 boy

솔직히 말해 나가끔 흔들릴때도없어
근대왜 나만걱정을 할까 그이상 사랑없어 boy
긴 시간의 만남에 혹은 자꾸는 사랑을 주는
니가왜 설레임에 나를 속이게 된니가 boy


내가옆에 있어 외롭지는 안잖아 행복해 하다가
근데이젠 부담스러워지고 다른 여자들 낫다 생각해
그말엔 슬프지만

(Chorus)
니가 바람피고 왜나여기있을까 baby
나가 나를 지겨워해도 난아직도 your lady
자꾸니가 연락이엾고 나만슬퍼도
이젠제발 원래대로 돌아와주고
사랑해줘 너도 나만바라봐


오늘 나와의 약속을 미뤄
한두번 도아니고 벌써 버릇처럼 수십번

다음에는 그래야지 이제부턴 잘해야지 하면서 계속만거짓말쳐
하지만 나만바보같에 널 날 자꾸속이게돼
나쁜건 맛는 데 매번 맘앞으게돼
넌 boy boy boy
내가모 내잘못했는 지 말해 왜못해 ah


혼자있는 게싫어 근데넌 안오잫아
화내고하다가 또어느새 매일용서해주고
내친구가 나한태 바보라고 하지만

(Chorus)
니가 바람피고 왜나여기있을까 baby
나가 나를 지겨워해도 난아직도 your lady
자꾸니가 연락이엾고 나만슬퍼도
이젠제발 원래대로 돌아와주고
사랑해줘 너도 나만바라봐

네가 이기적이란 걸난 너무잘 아라
난 매일 이자리 이곳에서 널 기다리는 데 그것만안야 baby
너 만은 언제나 나 하나뿐이기를 바래
이젠 나 귀찮아 널기다리도 안온걸 근데 나는 아직있잖아


(Chorus)
니가 바람피고 왜나여기있을까 baby
나가 나를 지겨워해도 난아직도 your lady
자꾸니가 연락이엾고 나만슬퍼도
이젠제발 원래대로 돌아와주고
사랑해줘 너도 나만바라봐


[r] Look Only At Me Pt. 4 – Response to GDragon’s Pt. 2

Ah ah ah ah I’m sorry babe
Dah dah dah dah yong suh neun moht hae
ah ah ah ah I’m sorry babe
nah mahn bah rah bwah part 4


nahm jahn dah ddok gaht dahn geu mahl nah ee jaen meet neun dah boy
yuh gee kkut nae gah mahn naht duhn geu ruhn sah rahm gwah neun ddok gaht eun boy
nah ha nah mahn bah rah boh gaet dahn mahl nee guh geet mahl boy
geu ree goh nae gae joon sah rang ahp ae bae sheen eun haet jee boy

sohl jeek hee mahl hae nah gah kkeum heun deu reehl ddae doh uhp suh
geun dae wae nah mahn guk jung eul hahl kkah geu ee sang sah rang uhp suh boy
geen shee gahn ae mahn nahm ae hok eun gah kkoo neun sah rahm eul joo neun
nee gah wae suhl lae eem ae nah reul sohk ee gae dwaen nee gah boy


nae gah yuhp ae eet suh wae rohp gee neun ahn jahn ah haeng bohk hae ha dah gah
geun dae ee jaen boo dahm seu ruh wuh jee goh dah reun yuh jah deul naht dah saeng gahk hae
geu mahl aen seul peu jee mahn

(Chorus)
nee gah bah rahm pee goh wae nahn yuh kee eet seul kkah baby
nee gah nah reul jee gyuh wuh hae doh nahn ah jeek doh your lady
jah kkooh yuhn rahk ee uhp goh nah mahn seul puh doh
ee jaen jae bahl wuhn lae dae roh dohl ah wah joo goh
sah rang hae jwuh nuh doh nah mahn bah rah bwah


oh neul nah wah ae yahk sohk eul mee lwuh
hahn doo buhn doh ah nee goh buhl suh buh reut chuh ruhm soo ship buhn

dah eum ae neun geu rae yah jee ee jae boo tuhn jahl hae yah jee ha myun suh gae sohk mahn guh jeet mahl chuh
ha jee mahn nah mahn ba bo gaht ae nuhl nahl jah ggoo sohk ee gae dwae
nah bbeun guhn maht neun dae mae buhn mahn ahp eu gae dwae
nuhn boy boy boy
nae gah moh nae jahl moht haet neun jee mahl hae wae moht hae ah


hohn jah eet neun gae sheel uh geun dae nuhn ahn oh jahn ah
hwa nae goh ha dah gah ddoh uh neu sae mae eel yong suh hae joo goh
nae cheen goo gah nah han tae ba bo rah go ha jee mahn

(Chorus)
nee gah bah rahm pee goh wae nahn yuh kee eet seul kkah baby
nee gah nah reul jee gyuh wuh hae doh nahn ah jeek doh your lady
jah kkooh yuhn rahk ee uhp goh nah mahn seul puh doh
ee jaen jae bahl wuhn lae dae roh dohl ah wah joo goh
sah rang hae jwuh nuh doh nah mahn bah rah bwah

nee gah ee gee juhk ee rahn guhl nahn nuh moo jahl ah rah
nahn mae eel ee jah ree ee goht ae suh nuhl kee dah ree neun dae geu guht mahn yah baby
nuh mahn eun uhn jae nah nah ha nah bboon ee gee reul bah rae
ee jaen nah gwee chahn ah nuhl kee dah ree doh ahn ohn guhl geun dae nah neun ah jeek eet jahn ah


(Chorus)
nee gah bah rahm pee goh wae nahn yuh kee eet seul kkah baby
nee gah nah reul jee gyuh wuh hae doh nahn ah jeek doh your lady
jah kkooh yuhn rahk ee uhp goh nah mahn seul puh doh
ee jaen jae bahl wuhn lae dae roh dohl ah wah joo goh
sah rang hae jwuh nuh doh nah mahn bah rah bwah


[t] Look Only At Me Pt. 4 – Response to GDragon’s Pt. 2

I’m not trying to make sense here
I’m trying to make things right
I’m not asking
I’m telling

Ah ah ah ah I’m sorry babe
I can’t forgive everything
ah ah ah ah I’m sorry babe
Just look at me part 4

Now I trust the saying ‘men are all the same’, boy
You’re just like all the other guys I’ve met boy
You lied when you said you would only look at me boy
And you betrayed the love I gave you boy
Honestly, I’ve never been shaken (by another man)
But why is it that I’m worrying, I don’t have anymore love (to give) boy
After this long time we’ve been meeting, I’m always giving my love to you
But why are you the one being shaken (by another woman), you’re the one lying to me boy

You aren’t lonely because I’m next to you and we’re happy
But now it’s awkward and you thinking other women are better
And I’m sad at that fact

(Chorus)
You’re cheating on me but why am I still here baby
Even if you’re tired of me I’m still your lady
You keep on not calling me and I’m the only one who’s sad
Now please let’s go back to the way we were before and come back to me
Love me too look at only me

(Honey, I’m sorry)
Today you push our promise
It’s not even one or two times, but like a habit, infintely (Let’s see each other tomorrow for sure)
You say I’ll do it next time, I’ll be good from now on, and yet you still lie
Still I feel stupid trusting your lies
I know what you’re doing is bad and my heart always gets hurt
You’re boy boy boy
Tell me what I did wrong ah
(You just need to know)

I don’t like being alone but you’re not coming
I become angry but then I forgive you everyday
My friends tell me I’m stupid

(Chorus)
You’re cheating on me but why am I still here baby
Even if you’re tired of me I’m still your lady
You keep on not calling me and I’m the only one who’s sad
Now please let’s go back to the way we were before and come back to me
Love me too look at only me

I know you’re selfish (Actually, I’m not sure)
Everyday I wait for you in this spot but that’s it baby
I wish that you will be only mine
I’m tired now that I wait and you don’t come, but I’m still here

(Chorus)
You’re cheating on me but why am I still here baby
Even if you’re tired of me I’m still your lady
You keep on not calling me and I’m the only one who’s sad
Now please let’s go back to the way we were before and come back to me
Love me too look at only me

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Posted 22 August 2008 - 08:37 AM

Name/Username: Kay/linuhhparkk
Color Auditioning: Black
Audio Clip of the Section: Chorus

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Posted 22 August 2008 - 09:10 AM

Thanks for auditioning smile.gif
There's an extra part that you might not have seen for the black part:

Can you also submit an acapella version of the clip without the background?

혼자있는 게싫어 근데넌 안오잫아
화내고하다가 또어느새 매일용서해주고
내친구가 나한태 바보라고 하지만

hohn jah eet neun gae sheel uh geun dae nuhn ahn oh jahn ah
hwa nae goh ha dah gah ddoh uh neu sae mae eel yong suh hae joo goh
nae cheen goo gah nah han tae ba bo rah go ha jee mahn

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