[pinku]

Hi everybody

this's my new song please listen and tell me what do u think......thank u

I have nothing

[mkly]

you did a good job.

especially since this song is pretty hard to tackle

good job

[whan4]

it was good. i liked it...keep it up!

[THEyoochunSTALKER]

first thing... pronunciation. i'm sorry but.. i do think your english pronunciation's rather off.
*hides*

you can hit the notes rather firm, and in control, which yes is a good thing.
but you'll to work more on the vibratos and your turnary notes. you tend to go off when you have to switch notes rapidly. (ok i'm sorry cz i duno what's the specific term for it ><)

more emotions needed though!
you sounded like you're shouting when it's the climax part near the half end of the song.
so... yeah.

i think you had a rather special tonality though~

i'm sorry if i sounded harsh or anything neh ><
practice more, and share more, neh? ^^

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[CtlunatC]

you were a bit too throaty imo. your tone is unique, but it sounded like it mostly came from your throat.

and i agree with the person above me. put more effort into your pronounciation and more emotion.

good job.

[pinku]

haha

thanks for all of ur advice :>

[GEtMeSuMRiCE]

Wow. I give you props for singing this song. This song is really hard and requires a big range.

I think you have the range for it, too. I just think that you were holding back. To me, it sounded like your voice was coming out of your nose a little. I would say try to open up your throat a little.

Also, EMOTIONS EMOTIONS EMOTIONS! Feel the song!!

The pronunciation could also use a little work.

Other than that, props for tackling this song.